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ai
2007-03-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw cute...

Nagustuhan ko yung biglang talon sa oras tapos 26 na si Jeanne...

nakakalungkot pero ang ganda.

Tingin ko may nagsabi na nito sa nakaraang review pero isa ito sa mga magaganda at matinong jeanneXhao na nabasa ko. Gud luck!
Dark-Hooded Eriol the Magic...
2006-12-18
ch 1,
abuseI read this a long time ago but now was the only time I got around to writing a decent enough review for an excellent story! :D It's been a long time for your Mankin fans, hehe! Hao is Hao and Jeanne is Jeanne... They'll always come alive under your magic touch. Nobody quite writes them the way you do, except for their creators of course. You bring out wit, charm and amusing witty verbal battles to life between two interesting enough characters. They're funny, real and true to themselves... I loved the coffin in the lingerie department jibe as well as the strawberry tastes better than chocolate lesson. ^_^ As always your witty writing style and amusing characters bring forth a lesson and a philosophy out most effectively. Beautiful story, Ate Syao. (Write more, ha? XD)
sardslfdosfejls
2006-11-28
ch 1, anon.
abusei really liked this story, probably the best haojeanne story in a long long time. thank you.
Lillythemarshmellowqueen
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abuseaw! so sad so sweet!
Story Weaver1
2006-11-07
ch 1,
abuseNow THIS is how a Hao+Jeane should be! No rommantic stuff but a kind of odd friendship. Hao is very much in character, I love it! He's so annoying cheerful and tricksterlike. He's a good influence on the stuffy iron maiden ^_^. I really like the ending, the two of them like old friends. Something I would to point out was you Jeane in love with Lyserig and Hao teased her without jeaslousy. Very nice.
Sheo Darren
2006-11-07
ch 1,
abuseAw...

Normally, I'm an out-and-out rabid LysJean fan... but... this is really good stuff.

> ”Oh?” And Hao did perhaps the most absurd thing in the world—clap his hands delightedly. “The girl who carries her coffin around, even in the lingerie department of the mall? Most entertaining.”

LOL Jeanne-chama oughta smack him good ^_^

> It was Hao, who had summoned his Spirit of Fire. She shook her head, sighing. Where else could one find a power spirit that could summon another power spirit?

Perhaps the best line in the story for me. The delicious irony makes me reel with delight. I absolutely love it.

The mellow Hao is fun to read. His interaction with Jeanne is entertaining. And the ending is quite surprising- and sweetly touching.

Ang galeng mo talaga, Ate Syaowie! *bows in worship*
Keyk the Edible
2006-11-06
ch 1,
abuseThank you! Thank you very much, ate syaowee!

And I see you added Lyzerg there too. :3 Thankies. I've always liked Hoa's, so called, 'humor'. :) You put this before every other fic request. I'm so happy. I was expecting this around next, next week but i'm glad you finished it.

It must've eaten a lot of your time. I'm sorry for that. u.u

Again, thank you.

(And when I was reading the latter part, a pesky fly buzzed in front of the computer. So I killed it. HA! [Eeww... fly blood on my palms.])
hee hee
2006-11-06
ch 1, anon.
abusewow...
you should write more shaman king!

I like the witty hao a lot... and I also like how jeanne still seems calm and sedated...
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