wow, i like how the story is coming up, yay!, bokomon and neemon are back, i hope you update soon, i can´wait

Love it! Please keep going, I love reading storys because I have nothing to do this summer!
Thanks!

glad to see you around and updating. Im glad i was looking at profies or else i wouldnt have found that you updated.

happy birthday!! i wish i was fifteen...

anyway.. you have a really good chapter! how do you come up with all the speeches before the purification thing!! its really creative i think, unless you just copy it from some where...

Awesome update, just read all 22 chapters back to back (I have no life), also loved the nod to Tamers. Upadate soon, goggleheads rule Takumi forever.

This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Takuya and Izumi forever.

Whooho, Takuya's back! On to battle my friends!

I like to give everyone the benefit of the doubt when reading. I go in assuming it will be a wonderful story. So please don't take it personally when I say I will not read beyond the first chapter. You lost me as a reader. That's one of the sad things. It can be great later on, but if you can't hook the reader right away, it might as well be dull. Because often the reader won't get that far. Although I will say you did a decent job of beginning the story in the middle of action.

Switching tense is never a good idea. You do it more than once. Stick with either present or past--I prefer past tense, but it doesn't have to be that way.

When writing dialogue, when you change speakers you should ALWAYS begin a new paragraph. That's standard. Take care of that and it will be considerably easier to read (one reason why I gave up).

I saw you use the phrase "little did he know." Bad idea. I think I know why you did it, but trust me when I say it sounds bad. If he doesn't know about it, why bother mentioning it? (I'm biased against omniscient third person, so feel free to ignore my comment if you wish, but "little did you know" is a cliché that needs to go.)

nice!! very discrittive!

i also love your motto: awaken the solution; Spirit Evolution!! ha ha !!

good work. keep it up

awesome! i cant for the follow up chapters. Please update.

i really like it ^^ and flamon is here :D sorry for late review. good luck with ur story and hurry with the next chapter :D hope somethign more will happen to takuya :D

Its a cliffy, but not very suspenseful. Anyways, good recovery chapter. It wouldve been way worse if you hadnt.or you couldve had takuya come back and then give us flash backs. still good. kep going.

duskmon a good guy!? why didnt he die? well now off to mephistomon. the duskmon saga lasted pretty long. congrats.

Yay! Takuya is alive! I knew you wouldn't kill him off for good.
By the way I'm a Takuya-fangirl so... Yeah.. Yay! For the twins! And Takuya!