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Reviews for: Thy Native Innocence
BAFFDWTWFMAfan
2007-09-21 . chapter 1
This is really good. Wonderful and oh-so-accurate portrayal of Greed - who he is amongst the homunculi, his reason for being, and just what it must be like to be him.
ROGUEFURY
2007-01-13 . chapter 1
Really interesting. I hope you update soon. I'm just getting into FMA, and Greed is my favorite char. Love how you wrote the descriptions.Great so far.

LATER. ROGUEFURY
Domenic
2006-12-09 . chapter 1
Going on favorites.

Mad, desperate, sympathetic Greed...
MercuryMoon
2006-11-06 . chapter 1
Quite deep. I love how you really got into Greed's head and how he feels. I also really liked how you put Greed as a manifestion of what Dante wants. I haven't seen that too often except in my own writing. Yay. We came upon the same realization x] Lesse.. nice description skills, great meaning to the fic, not much else to say!

^.^ Good job.
words without
2006-11-06 . chapter 1
This was really amazing. I loved the Greed/Marta hints best of all, because no one ever writes that paring and it's one of my favorites. Very in-character too.
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