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Closer than far
2007-09-17
ch 13,
abuseAhh! Wow, you are my favorite writer. This is my all time favorite CaRWash fic. You're are so great! This is just wonderful. I really thought all the characters were believable, and I could totally see this happening. Great job!
deadly-bliss
2007-02-17
ch 1,
abuseXP Wow... Yay! That's so cute! Excuse me, I need to find ERotIcA(
demolished-soul
2007-01-09
ch 13,
abuseThat was a beautiful ending!
ObessedTWFan
2007-01-09
ch 13,
abuseWhat a lovely way to such a wonderful piece. Loved every minute I spent reading it.
CalleighWolfe (TalkCSI)
2007-01-02
ch 13, anon.
abuseExcellent "final"! :D
molly C
2007-01-02
ch 13, anon.
abusethat was simply lovely. what a perfect ending.
Lilith
2007-01-01
ch 13, anon.
abuseAw, I can't believe it's already over!
I really enjoyed reading this chapter, it was a pleasure for my mind, like everything you write.
I hope you're writing a new fic soon, keep your beautiful works coming.
csiwolfe08
2007-01-01
ch 13,
abuseYay! good ending, I really liked it. Good job.
vmars3
2006-12-31
ch 13,
abuseloved it!! thanks for the update!
sandersidle
2006-12-31
ch 13,
abuseI can't believe it's over! I love that story. Cute ending too! But I'm pretty sure you knew I'd love it. lol. *claps* Awesome job. :)
Moony's Lady
2006-12-31
ch 13,
abuseAbsolutely fantastic work, Luna! This chapter was so introspective and gorgeously written, it made me shiver when they hugged.

She already knew they’d have to confront the whole lab and its policy, not to mention the pleasure the IAB would derive from breathing on their necks all the time, waiting for them to make a false step. As to what regarded gossips, they already were used at them.

--> Very well done. Many fic writers usually forget that, as Ryan said, it's not all honey and roses and make it all easy, but you wisely pointed out they won't just live happily ever after, they'll have to face a lot of obstacles. :bounce:

All her five senses were completely engaged in perceiving every single inch of him, in taking in the sweetness in his gaze. It was so hard to believe the events in the previous days had really happened, now.

Such a beautiful imagery!

Ryan watched her look for the keys in her purse and let go of her, once again trying to figure out how they had ended up there when only a minute ago, or that was his impression, she had kissed him in front of her condo. The lapse of time between the two events had become somewhat confused and now seemed shorter than it had actually been, as if his memories of the past two months had collapsed into one single instant, one only memory which began and ended with a kiss.

--> Again, such an intense passage.

“This time, though,” She answered. “I know where I’m going.”

--> You always know how to end a fic, and this time you really touched me. It was perfect scene to close a fic.

Thanks for writing all these beautiful fics, keep up the excellent work!
Dutchie15
2006-12-31
ch 13,
abuse*cries* I can't believe it's done! I think I fell in love with this story. (as I did with all your others) So now me and this story broke up, you must write a new one for me asap.

You know I love it hun, there's no need for me to say it (but I did it anyway) You're a really really talented writer, and you know I don't just say that because you're my friend (a damn good one too) I can't wait to see what you come up with next time. Whatever it is, I'm sure it will be great. And I'm sure I'll be reading it.
Claire
2006-12-20
ch 12, anon.
abuseLuv it! Hope you update this soon!
csiwolfe08
2006-12-14
ch 12,
abuseAw, cute. Keep up the good work.
demolished-soul
2006-12-11
ch 12,
abuseAww, that was a sweet chapter. Calleigh needs to be loved =) For some reason, this story reminds me of a song called "She Will Be Loved" by Maroon 5. I like how the story is progressing! Great work!
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