oohhh major cliffie! DONT LET SUNNY PERISH! PLZ! UPDATE SOON! And also can u plz check out my newest story, Book 14-The Devastating Doom? THx :)

Hmm... I like it. The best ASoUE fic I've read all evening.

OMG! *gasps* SO suspenseful! A little short, but great, as usual. Keep writing!

OMG!Is sunny going to die? you can't kill sunny. I won't let you. Keep writing

belle07

awesome chapter

Ooh, fighting within the group of friends. I can't wait to see what happens. It was an awesome chapter, as always. Keep writing!

great chapter. can't wait for the next one

Oh, keep writing. I want to see what happens.

Belle07

Wow, lot of emotion in this chapter, Benchwarmer. Keep writing, though. When is Vi, going to tell them that their father is alive?

Belle07

Great chapter, hope there's more soon

Wow, very emotional chapter. I feel so sorry for them. Keep writing!

Oh, keep writing. I read and bought book 13 and it was amazing. I think there was a triangle, Kit, Olaf and dewey. Have you read The beatrice letters. I so want to read it. It's about Beatrice Baudelaire and she is 10 and a vfd member. I don't want to spiol it because i read it on wikipedia.

Well, keep writing I love the beginning. Who is the baby Justice had in her arms? Hers?

Belle07

Still good. I think you should make it a little more like how Lemony Snicket writes them. What I mean is you should tell the reader what a big word means or tell the reader to put the book down.

Brad395

Really good! I enjoyed it but you need something bad to happen. After all it is a Series Of Unfortunate Events.

Brad395

Interesting take on Strauss, almost as if nothing in The Penultimate Peril happened.