I LOVED IT! Thanks!

Hilarious! I could totally see this happening. Write more much more! Although Leo swearing is a bit out of character.

Leonardo suffering from road rage! Never thought I’d see that happen, he sounds like me when I’m driving *grins*

thanks for putting a smile on my face, Kali :-)

hehe...i can definately relate to everything! even to the road rage...although my dad has to be much worse then leo! LOL.

wonderful story, keep writing.

Tubular

hehehehe that's funny

Sounds like the malls here! I loved the story, it was very funny and I bet it would be loads of fun to actually shop with these four. Something tells me Hot Topic and KB Toys would be the place to find them if you lose them.

Hee hee! I like this story! KC's right- shopping with these guys would be a whole heap of fun!