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TwistedLilBarbie
2008-05-28 . chapter 1
Cute :3
Deception Point
2007-11-11 . chapter 1
*lol* I sure liked the way L investigated his suspects and how they did their 'crime' *lol*

I think I've read this before and maybe forgot to review that time so I apologze. This is a good job though. ^_^
Tatacolt
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
Ha ha, it's just hillarious. Thanks
Sheik's Lonely
2007-03-07 . chapter 1
*Throws a party* You do such a good job with capturing characters.

I'm jealous and amused at the same time.
Ellerfru
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
Funny... I like the idea of Raito stealing L's cake... *g*
kitsuneluvuh
2007-01-25 . chapter 1
"Now holding only Raito’s thumb, Ryuuzaki disinterestedly stuffed it into his mouth."

Best line in fanfiction ever.
black poe
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
Congratulations, you just captured the pure essence of L in your fic. And for that, all the L-fangirls will bow to you. :worship-glomps you: I totally loved your story! Raito was freakin crazy and hilarious and L was freakin crazy and genius!

My favorite line: Raito groaned inwardly as Ryuuzaki appeared to silently reassure the cake that he would be right back.

LOL! Oh, L. How I love you to bits.

Wonderful job on this. I hope to see more fics from you!
Yei
2006-11-21 . chapter 1
This was hilarious:D Great fic:)
CuriousDreamWeaver
2006-11-18 . chapter 1
LOL I loved it! It was incredibly amusing. Well done! Poor Raito, that would have been so traumatic! LOL
^_~
CDW
FreakofImagination
2006-11-10 . chapter 1
Actually...it's quite original in the fact that it doesn't have L kissing Raito to get the last of the cake ^_^

Lovely drabble, thank ya so much fer it!
capslocked
2006-11-08 . chapter 1
This made my day.

I always wondered just _how_ weird Ryuuzaki is, and this answered my question in full. No wonder Raito went temporarily mad; I guess even Ryuuzaki would go insane if he were to be chained to someone as weird as he is. [Okay, that didn't sound right, but what the hell.]

Great work, I loved it to bits.

~Sam out
Elladan Seregon
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
Unoriginality my foot! [laughing ** off] I loved this, and it was definitly original! Cause, really, have you read a fic where Raito just STUFFS the damn cake into his mouth!?

Oh, and:

The response was not the immediate reaction Raito was anticipating, although admittedly he wasn’t sure what type of response he was going for- spontaneous combustion?

Best line ever! XD

Heheh, my brains just like Matsuda's!

I love you!
Morlana
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
Okay that was very f unny, great job.
akari-hayashi
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
Love this, love this! XD OMG, I love how L "outsmarted" Raito at the end. And Matsuda's blurting just adds to the fun. :3
Hybrid-Demon
2006-11-06 . chapter 1
I thought this was really cute!!

Ne, I loved it. ^.^
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