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| Chamina 2008-05-31 ch 3,  | abuseYou hurry your butt up and make another chappie! I lost breath! What's Winry's reaction?! *running around like a maniac* I HAVE TO KNOW! IT'S KILLING MEH! by the way fantastic writing style! two thumbs up! |
| MouseleafXIII 2008-04-23 ch 3, | abuseWell, I was at a friend's house, and we're yaoi fans. Just playin' around, we decided to look up Mpreg, going thru all our favorite obsessions. We were looking thru the FMA search results, reading summaries. And guess what caught my eye..? You write this story so well! It's awesome. Seriously. I love Ed's reaction to the whole situation, and the way it's put together.. Wow. I'm hooked. LOL I can't wait to read more! I hope you update soon! (I am subbing and faving u! :D) |
| sarahelric13 2008-02-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseare you going to finish? |
| AAA99 2007-10-29 ch 3, | abuseWHAAT TTHHE F**K! What sick, twisted, and disturbed little hell did you pull this story out of? NO sereously? |
| Kiku 2007-09-22 ch 3, anon. | abusewoah...this is very good Colie-chan...hm, I won't pry but I will read if you do continue! Keep up the fantastic work ;) ~Kiku |
| Star-In-The-Sky-25 2007-08-19 ch 3, | abuseUpdate son! XD |
| Wolf 2007-07-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow wow wow clify. a steep one to if I might say. So Ed's Pregnt, who would have guseds? ;D Na just kiding ya I new all along. I read the IFO thingy. WHEN YOU GONA UPDATE? IT'S BEEN AWILE YOU HAVEN'T FORGOTEN ABOUT YOU FAITFULL REVIEWS HAVE YOU NOW? NO(i hope not). THEN START THE NEXT CHAPTER THE SUPENSHEN IS KILLING ME(and other fans too)! with love Wolf. |
| Wolf 2007-07-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseED's been raped! By Envy? WOH hold on a sec If Al has his body back and Ed defeated homunculi then when Envy raped him why did he say he was following orders? Ow wait Daneit not dead or is she and this is some one elses master plan? COntinu I would like to find out what hapens later in the plot and who's be hine all this. Ok? Keep up the good work. |
| Wolf 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseReview, Review, Review, here's my fisrt Review to you. IT's starting out fabuls darling. Please do continue. Did I spell that right? |
| Funky Editors 12 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseWHAT?!Edward was raped!? strange. |
| elena 2007-05-19 ch 1, anon. | abusehow can a guy can be pregnant l just want to know that and one more thing how can ed be raped u r making him look weak |
| You never saw me 2007-04-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseThat was great, don't stop keep gooing this stuff is prure gold! |
| You never saw me 2007-04-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseWhat they do with the bowl? Never minde I don't want to know. |
| kelseycliche 2007-04-16 ch 3, | abuseI want more! :] |
| Free-Cloud-Optimist 2007-04-02 ch 3, | abuseI liked the story exept the raping part. You put in realistic reactions and really took hold of the characters. I am hoping for the next chapter. |