Chat speak in a story, not a good idea. You've got a good plot, but the typing could use some help.

This fic is very sweet!

I love these Fluffy feelings between them.

The kiss on the cheek is the best.

thanks for fixing the last chapter. Good ending

There are many grammar mistakes throughout, but I thought that the story was interesting.

I just wanted to point out that the last chaper was merely a repeat of the previous one.

I look forward to the final chapter being posted soon. :)

I want you to reread just one of your chapters. If you do, I won't have to list the massive quantity of errors you made. About the only good thing I can think of is that it seems like a good premise. I apologize, but you wrote as if English was your second language or something. If such is the case, I understand and am sorry.

The last two chapters are the good story.