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TechNomaNcer28
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Just ike Jade, always the one kidding around.One sjots like this are real good for a little relaxation.
Alli-dunno
2007-10-06 . chapter 1
Jeez, you'd think the group would learn by now. But with Jade, it's hard to tell whether he's joking or not...
strawberries and napkins
2007-08-11 . chapter 1
Gah!

The part with Mieu totally made me fall in love them

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2007-05-03 . chapter 1
Very good! It was strange, but as I was reading it, I felt like I'd read it somewhere else before, but I couldn't place it. I think something similar happened in one of the game skits or some such.
Shadowlover101
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
xD Jade is the best. You kept everyone in character really well! This is a really funny fic! I've already read it four times, and I still laugh through pretty much all of it!
Ark Navy
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
"This looks fresh... what kind of animal is it from, anyway...?"

"It looks like... rappig meat..." Tear said slowly, then put a hand to her mouth. "...We passed that herd of wild ones earlier... And then Jade fell back and disappeared..."

"...and then we saw a pillar of smoke and heard squealing sounds," Luke finished, putting a hand to his forehead.

::laughing to hard to review::

::adds to favs::
Egg
2006-12-08 . chapter 1
I just wanted to let you know that you write these characters fantastically well. Bravo, and your Jade makes me laugh SO HARD!!
Story Weaver1
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
ROFL!
I love how you do Jade's character, just like a trickster. All the characters are pretty In character really. Especially Jade. The whole meat gag was just hilarious!
mourning starr
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
lol. Yes, Jade's sarcasm. . .or was he speaking the truth? 0-o Who knows when it comes to him. XDD Well, cute story. It was rather comical, in my terms, atleast.


Ari-chan
BelovedMoon
2006-11-21 . chapter 1
I feel like this could have actually happened in the game, you write the characters quite well! Good job!
Rago Dragovian
2006-11-18 . chapter 1
I liked it. I found it funny.
Satanic Mechanic
2006-11-09 . chapter 1
This was a fun and nice read. Everyone was very much in character. Thanks for another great (Jade-centred XD) fic!

I shall go put in that catagory request now.
Picup
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
Mhm yeah, now I feel a bit guilty for spamming the Symphonia section with Abyss fan fiction...

Any ways, another great one shot from you x) I think this is one of my favorites, not to mention Natalia insisting on staying with Guy x)

-shot'd-

I can't wait to see your next one x)
PacWoman
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
Another great job.

I agree with you. I feal guilty with spamming the Tales of Symphonia section with Tales of the Abyss stories too. We should all write an e-mail to to have them create their own catagory. I'll go do that now.
Nirvana Fox
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
This was another great one-shot from you. I agree with Luke wholeheartedly. I wouldn't trust any food from Jade, either, lol.
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