this is great

this is great

great story it got me reading all the way to the end and i rarely do that so yay anyway great combination of genres. i'm glad somebody write something good about naruto's and sasuke's friendship unlike others.

Poor Tenten :'8 She didn't deserve it...I just hope she finds someone for else after all that :) And you really did a good job on the preview

I really tough that you were going to kill Kasumi! and then you were going to make Hinata use the scroll to bring her back to life.. but when I readed the part that she had died three days ago I really didnt know what to think ;)

I really like the sotry keep a good work

Do nit go and tell the story to new readers that is like a spoiler to me but im lovin it anyway

Good story. Maybe just a little bit strange...but I still like it heaps.

Btw i was going to tell you this but i forgot. you should definetly make a backround story of the illumina knights, i mean after your done with this story. like make a story all about the original illumina knights. that would be kinda cool. that way we can like find out all about the original illumina knights

Your OC is a total Mary-sue, sorry to say.

Naruto is desperately underwhelming and I can't even get past the first few chapters. Sorry, but this needs quite a bit of work.

arg im getting very ticked of at how this story shows naruto as the weakest and he has no surprises at all and how your OC is OBVIOUSLY SO smart and gives no-one else any credit. you really need to give Naruto more credit because he is SO shocked and awed at the girls and he has absolutely NOTHING to show off. he has absolutely NO power, but if you gave him the fox then he would be better. an example, your OC is always with him on things he should get credit for. like, she shouldnt have gotten the Kage Bunshin no jutsu because thats something that marks Naruto as Naruto, but she has it too. and everyone else is becoming stronger like ur OC and Hinata, and he is just SO awed at everything and he has nothing to show of and no-one is surprised or shocked at him, hes just really boring with nothing of his own. you took his Kage Bunshin for your own OC, you took part of the fox for your own OC, and your making her THE BEST out of everything, and the credit Naruto should have got for the brided but no, Katsumi got it too! he has nothing while your OC is everything... im not gonna finish this story, to bad. it could have been better, with mor epower for others then your OC. im sorry if i seem rude, but im sick and tired of your OC

one of the best naruto fanfics in the world!
Kudos to you!!

great story

i like so tottaly hate u 4 doing that

omg this last chapter was amazing! i can't wait for the next installment of the illumina knights to come out!

Nekomata tenten... sounds interesting. I suggest concentrating a different element on each of her claws for a multi-element slash attack.

Nice chapter, though Kazuki dieing sucks. I can't wait to see how things go in Tenten's future, especially after what the preview shows. Heaven help her friends if she gets some catnip... she'll make Drunken Lee look like a wimp!