i love it and i love your style of writting and detail i hope its not dead because its becoming perfect

Amazing fic, seems to be dead but just wanted to drop in and show my appreciation :)
I haven't seen this kind of angle to nabiki before over the years of reading fanfics, and it's very refreshing. The pacing is good and well, apart from a few spelling mistakes it's more or less perfect.
I added the story to my alert list so if it ever updates I'll be back :)

Usually it's Ranma who breaks. And it's quite different too see Nabiki in this posotion. I really hope you'll find it in you to finish this fic some day.

ahh Nabiki!
i'm like in love with this story!
cannot wait for another chapter!!

I was wondering if you planned on having any more to this one?

I ask as I noticed you are writing more again, though it seems for Naruto, not Ranma.

I would really like to see this fic continued. You are one of the only ones who write this pairing, and I enjoy it.

Hey, looking through the archives and stumbled across this. I like that you've made Nabiki much more human, though I'm still not 100% sure why she's scared of Ranma. Though part of that may be fear of what the fiancee brigade might do to her now that her secret is out. As others have said, watch the spelling, and I'd love to see another chapter.

Very good story.
Hope you find time to continue.

After having read this chapter I'm glad to see you have not thrown out Nabiki's previous reaciton to Ranma. I was a bit worried and honsetly disapointed earlier when it appeared that you had. As for her crying a lot as you mention in your note, that actually fits for someone who has had all the support cut out of their life and is still trying to find a new ballance. I'm on to chapter seven now but look forward to even more being written.

I hope there will be more of this. That ending demands continuation. I realy want to know how the others will take part of nabiki's secret coming out like that.

'Tis very cool! Only...will it be continued? To make a rather terrible pun...Please? :D

This needs to be continued, though you do need to work on your spelling.

I like this story very much. It brings in real family issues that a lot of fanfics tend to blur over. It also gives Nabiki and Kasumi much more depth than most people give them credit for. It brings in a POV of someone who isn't a superpowered matial artist, just an average human being with talent. Yes, I know Nabiki cries a lot, but after a few critical moments in some girls lives, they just have that period of time where everything's topsy-turvy. My own family went through something like this-not pertaining to fiances however or loving someone you shouldn't- and pretty much everyone was a wreck for months. The confusion, the anger, the strange happy moments when you realise you're still living... it touches something very real.

I loved this chapter. Yeah the story is dark, but the RN is really cute.

Keep up the great work! =)

Umm... I just wanted to write a review mainly as... encouragement? insistence? outright threat of indescribable physical pain?
...^^
Nah, I just want to read an update of my favourite Ranma fanfic... please...?

Sincerely
Mol