rookie-chan ur fic is rally amazing and its really nice especially when ryo and sakuno plan 2 have a revenge! hahaha! can i have a sugestion, can u manke a story in which royma has a twin plus theur family is a vampire? i hope u will agree to it i'm looking forward to your stories ok ty

im currently very.. confused >

Nice

nice

love it!
cute chappie!

i think the park that they went to is like enchated kingdom or is it ~cabel♪

wahahhahahha this chapter has an error that i dont why but made me laugh so hard a guy said from fudominen "we were about to finish SINNER" i know why you had this error cause the letter D was near to letter S but the "..sinner" part made me laugh its like their doing something else hahahhahaha sins... wahahahhaha im so addicted to this fic ~cabel♪

hahahahahhah you guys watched bakekang LOLx i did too cause our comp is beside the tv hahahahhaha my mom loves that show in some point it almost made me cry and you have a store wat kind of store (if you want to reply me please reply by email ) ~cabel♪

the meaning of mada mada dane is "no not yet" or "you have alot to learn" well im not sure of the second meaning but thats wat it says in the tagalog version (if you want to reply please reply through email it will be easier my email is ) ~cabel♪

LOL this was awesome!I wonder how you got the patience for such a long chapter! You Rock and keep wwriting!!

OMG I LOVE THIS! i love al your stories!! ^^ theyre so good!! =DD plz update 'Dreaming on the Radio' soon!! thnks!! ^-^

Nice story. I'm won't complain about some of your grammar ONLY because I understood what you were saying. I really, really, REALY liked reading it. congrats on finishing it.

Nice story!

Heck! The story is nice. You are even better than me in making stories even though the chapters are short. So this is my first time to read a ‘Tennis no oujisama’ fan fiction and I’m quite amused that we lived in the same land yeah. I love RyoSaku too! And what’s more about this fiction? Hmm… I tell you you’ve gone crazy! Demo that craziness made the story worthy to read. I can’t say more coz’ I haven’t finished reading all the chappies (that’s like reading my own story AGAIN). I’d skip pages; I’m just copy-paste, copy-pasting your chappies and read it later. I’m not that addicted to POT not as addicted to Naruto but I enjoy reading this one.

One more thing. “Warawa nai de. Onegai shimasu…” that is for my review. I’ll do it for you. LAUGHS! Sore dewa!

You have done very well! ^^

You should focuse on the storyline more. It will be better if you increase the story's description more and try to remain as realistic as possible.

Remember to proof read for spelling and grammatical corrections. Also, try not to be OOC(Out-of-character), unless you purposely wanted it that way. =DD

LOL. I sound like a teacher Dx