Yayz, I like this one-shot a lot. ^^ Glad I stumbled across it when looking for the akitoxkyo stories, which are practiculy non-exsistant ne? Anywho, great stories. :3

As usual, that was super-special awesome. I mean I always assume that it will be...I don't think this is a good general practice, but I am NEVER wrong with your stuff. That was GREAT. I love the idea of the Zodiac being connected in such a direct, painful way. As was mentioned already, the use of italics and bolding is really, really cool. It does make it more dramatic. Though, the use of it in 'now one of them is crying out' with the emphasis on 'them' didn't quite work. It indicates that thats the opposite of what normally happens. They DO do that, normally, he just doesn't hear it. The contrast would be HIM crying out...uh, sorry if that doesn't make a lot of sense. I try to explain things!

Anyway that's only an infintisimal flaw. I point it out because concrit is awesome and you are a great writer and stuff. Overall it was really spiffy and I think this is already on my favorites list but just in case I'm putting it on again. You rock yay!

*sets up the IV*

Brilliant. Absolutely, astoundingly brilliant. Seriously. I just turned to the person next to me and gaped and then said it was incredible and told them to read it even though they don't really know very much about Furuba.

I'm lost for words. I wish I could give you concrit, but you really don't need it. One teensy error: "Half and hour later and I’m still feeling relatively good." That's it.

+fav Author, and I'm off to read your other stuff now.

My heart is broken. I hate to think of him dying. It was a moving story. I was glad Yuki came back, that was a nice final touch. Anyway, I'm depressed after reading this. I have to go read something cheerful now.

Wow. Just wow. The characters were all very much themselves. Which I think is probably especially hard to do with Akito in a 'what if' type fic. And the situation seemed so very plausible. The writing itself was very good, and I liked how the end got somewhat disjointed, as thoughts at such a time probably would.

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*Brain asplodes*

Raikune that was AMAZING. It is not by any stretch of the imagination SHORT, but it was AWESOME. Oh my god. I am totally blown away by how fantastic it was. It made me cry. My eyes are still swimming. You are, without a doubt, the best Akito author out there. I would give anything for your talent. This was...wow I can hardly even think of what to say, my brain is just clouded over with 'OMG AWESOME!' and the like. I'll try to say something more intelligent.

First off, the plotting was perfect. You had absolutely no irrelevant detail, and you skipped to different times in a way that makes it look easy. I love that you made Akito still sick later on...it makes perfect sense, and you know I love him diseased. The fact that you had some of them stick with him was great, I've always thought there was more to the bond then just the curse, he's their FAMILY. I love this so much. Yuki's appearance later was what brought the tears to my eyes though. The fact that he couldn't forgive him worked perfectly. Everything did. It was so in character. This has got to be the best fic I've ever read.

I am going to pimp it out in AITB. I don't care if it makes my author's notes longer than the actual story, I will. It's just that good. If it doesn't get more reviews soon I'm going to have to hurt someone. doesn't know what it's missing. You should have millions of reviews.

(Forgive me if I sound like a crazy person, this was just THAT good a fic.)