short but i like it!!

wow, i think ive read that b4, lol, but i LOVED it!! GREAT story!! I really like how u ended with the same quote u started with, but changed wat it meant. Great writing. Tootles.

Oh! I... I actually liked it. Wow. I guess it helps that I was never a fan of that feral. But minus the foul words, this piece is written well. I can almost feel Jesse's pain. X_x

Wow,i really like it! however, i feel that since this is Jesse, tho he would be thinking all this, he would also be tryin to justify her outburst. Ya he was upset, thats jesse holding it all inside, but i just think a part of him would be arguing with his hate that he would be like, ya but she only wanted to save all of us, or ya, but i guess it was either i mite die or we all definitely die. Cuz Jesse is so selfless, which is y he is so hurt, that he would put himself b for the others. N e ways, GREAT story! Even with wat i had to say, i still loved it!! Kool, n e more coming? nother chapter say? Tootles!