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| Evil Amplified 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseHmm don't think I reviewed this one, so I think I shall now. It's not what I expected from you, Shan. I'm not completely sure why. Oh it has shades of your 'outlook' but there's something there that I'm not used to. But it is very good anyway. I can actually picture that happening and them continueing on to what we saw on the show. Very good, my dear. |
| piperspeanut 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseHey that was so good. I know I say this a lot but I loved it. My fave. stories are ones with fluff between Piper, Loe, Wyatt and Chris. I am going to read some more of yours later. |
| Anime's-mistress 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI totally adore this story and would love to read another chapter if you decided, even after all this time, to write one. C: |
| MidnightLightning36 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseCute story. I can't really think of what else to say. :D |
| neb92 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseHm... I like your other stories alot better, but I guess this one is still pretty ok. |
| SunshineDaisies816 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseHi! You suck! Just kidding! Just kidding! The story was cute! :-) |
| Werid-O-Ville 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseaeh i love this |
| Ayana Starman 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abusegreat story update soon, cant wait to see what leo does when he finds out about chris, update soon |
| KC-Piper-fan 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Bit of editing: when chris is on the bridge, the paragraph starting "Chris could have orbed away;" There are some 1st person 3rd person persona changes. Otherwise a really good little story. I can tell you had some time on your hands. lol, but that's cool it lets you get some of these little one part stories out. I'm sure they were just itching to get off your hard drive and into this website. lol |
| nicole812us 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseIt was sweet. I know it had to be hard for Piper to find out the person she hasn't been trusting is her son. |
| Charmedp3123 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseaw. so sweet! |
| Witty-Kate 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abusehi! you suck lol just kidding but u asked for it literaly that was really good! |
| teal-lover 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abusei liked it, including the play on the title. |
| bstant 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseVery good. |
| Melinda Wyatt Charmed 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseYou know, sometimes, I read fanfics and I 'm thinking 'How much more till the end?'.. I never thought that reading any of your stories. I guess you want the reviewers to be honest, so I am gonna be. I didn't like Piper's reactions or replies, sometimes, but some of them were so Piper.. But, Chris, you know Chris very well and I am pretty sure, he would say exactly these things or react exactly like that.. You are great at description! ;) lol |