This was great! I really enjoyed reading it.

O! I LOVED IT!
It was so adorable!
You absolutly had my attention right to the very last sentance! I agree with "Zeke's New Girlfriend.;)" writing something about thier children would be great and besides, I simply must read more of your work!
Keep it up!
Neoholmesz_

love it!

Omg..That was the cutest story...You are a great writer!..You really had the attitudes of the characters down...I thought that I was reading a transcript to the show...Once again...GREAT STORY!..:)

LOL. i love it! especially zeke! tee-hee. are you going to do a sequel where the kids are older. i'm sure Zeke and Avery will be the hottest guys in their class. ;) but for now the hottest twins to don diapers! (gary would be the hottest single baby to don diapers!) i loved all of it. it was very well-written and i almost had a heart attack when they said she might die. thanks for the happy ending!