 yellowivy 2009-10-29 . chapter 16hahahaha this story is genious it's PERFECT! |
 S.J.Stevens 2008-12-29 . chapter 16I didn't think this chapter was terrible at all. Just terribly short. lol. Honestly it sounds like it's getting a LOT more interesting. So, Aiko isn't actually Aiko, right? Someone is merely using her body to get to Shikamaru? That sounds similar to what Orochimaru attempted with Sasuke. Except it wasn't seduction then. Or atleast we hope not. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
 x0x 2008-12-22 . chapter 16Aw, but it was an awesome chapter Aki, thank you. =) |
 nerviouza 2008-12-22 . chapter 16I'm a new fan of this fic and I've just read your story
and it kills me! I wanted more... you left me engrossed
and hanged with it... but still loving it.
Please update fast... kidding, take your time just don't
keep me hanging for too long. |
 jadedXelement 2008-12-21 . chapter 16take all the time you need to write the next chapter.. just dont give up on the story! :) i love where its going .. even if the writing style changed. aiko definitely is strange and is hiding something .. i hope you can update soon but either way i'll be waiting! |
 Arannar 2008-12-16 . chapter 16I really appreciated this plot as it got my eyes open to shikaino which I never thought about before, I'm hoping for a breathtaking final.
I like the fact that you mix both some plot progress aswell as some comical elements, it lifts the story even higher. All I can say is work hard! Gambatte! I know I'll be there reading your next post! |
 SarcasticallyTroublesomeGirl 2008-12-14 . chapter 16Aw this chapters not bad. Dont be so hard on yourself. It's just a little short. But I mean, just play on the cliffhangers. This chapter was good though, I loved that "big girls" line. Ino's so funny. That's why you're one of my fav authors. You make me love Shikaino all over again. (kinda obsessed with Twilight(jacob!) right now) lol anyways, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see the next chapter. |
 The Reading Maid 2008-12-14 . chapter 16Everyone's allowed to get sick of a plot once in a while. No one blames you. But I have faith that you'll be able to muscle your way through, no matter how crappy the chapters may seem or painful the typing may be. Hooray! |
 SMGstring 2008-12-14 . chapter 16lol seduction afoot! Wish I had the ladies battling over me XD |
 Kiyo-chan 2008-12-14 . chapter 16 I luff, but I feel bad cuz I never did what you asked. T.T I ish a bad person. |
 jadedXelement 2008-09-30 . chapter 15aww please tell me you haven't given up on this story! i'm so anxious to find out why aiko is so mysterious and what she's hiding and not to mention why her and ino are friendly with one another now. please please please update! |
 Xxninny435xX 2008-09-09 . chapter 16Joo must update soon!
I want sum moar!
MOAR! |
 A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fairy 2008-07-28 . chapter 16update soon please! i love the story and i cant wait to see...well read the next chapter! sorry i usually leave a funny or completely random review but im tired and it's 4AM and i havent slept yet so yeah...so u were jipped off! sorry!
luve,
Fairy! |
 La Mariposa3795 2008-07-20 . chapter 16I am SO loving this story...I can't wait for you to update again! Great job! |
 DarkMaidenTerri 2008-04-15 . chapter 15(cries and hugs your legs)IM SO SORRY I HAVENT REVIEWED IN YEARS (puts on unfaithful reviewer and failure as an aurthor tanktop and sits in the emo corner)NYU DAMN U COMCAST INTERNET AND PARENTAL CONTROLS AND JOB NOT PAYIN ME ENUFF TO GET A LAPTOP T~T |