interesting - she's right he is a rubbish father - i mean who wouldn't notice for 4 years that their kids have swapped places?!

“Hello, what brings guys here?”

I think you meant "you guys" here. Anyway, great chapter. I love the way you did Alanna - it's not in the least OOC. Kudos to you. Happy New Year and please leave a review if you can. Toodles.

I did enjoy it a lot! I was always curious as to what happened during the gap. Alanna isn't too sad is she? Just in shock, right? And Thom's name is NOT Thomas - it's just Thom.

yeah, of course mine is a one shot, so it's very different. I like your new chapter, and you're right about the drama.

Wow! Filling the gap nicely - I've always wondered how she found out. The typos aren't terribly noticable. Can't wait for more!

Ouchy...

Normally I don't really like hearing about funerals, but this is pretty well-written.

Keep going.

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Hi, I've always wondered how Alan got the news. I might have liked it more dramatic, but it's good. Are you going to write the actual funeral?