Quite interesting. I like the ominous atmosphere.

While I have an idea which character your writing about, I haven't played the game in so long I don't remember...giant claw, you'd think I'd recall something like that. Well I'm sure it'll come back to me one day.

Anyway on to the ever so useful reviewing thing. I enjoyed reading it, a lot of drama, horror and angst in a very short piece and I usually enjoy reading what you write. The narrative felt kind of distant and maybe would be more compelling with a less distant narrator/POV/thing mad the whole thing more immediate - less past tense sort of thing.

Good work - glad I read it

achitka