it's a really good story
won't you continue, pretty pleae...!!

I really like this story and I hope you continue it, you write really well.

I hope that you update this story soon! By the way, when is Aion, Satella and Azmaria going to find out. Actually, for that matter, where are they?

The image isn't there anymore... :(

Very good. You've managed to keep everyone go character whichs is great and the new Chrno sounds awesome! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you update soon.

sweet story, keep it up

omg!! plz oh plz update! this by far is my fave story since forever!! continue with this great work youve done and i will read on!! Great work indeed!! cha!

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love it and look forward to the next chapter

Neato =D
Update soon ^^
It's very good!

Whoa!
Nice mission!
It's okay!
UPDATE SON!

That was a great chapter, I loved your use of old time lingo. It added alot to the story.

I had almost forgotten this. But fun with a new chapter!
I hope you will continue to update this, because the plot is great.

And nostril-lids! That's fun :P

. . . Kay . . . I have a few ideas what's gona happen but . . . I'll better keep them to meself.

Continue to write! This is still good.

So Chrono wanted to wear big boy pants and now he is acting like a child? and Rosette has the same personallity of went she first met Chrono? That soo Jake (yes I love the word!) Update soon!