|Reviews for Autumn Leaf|
| Waveless0Emotions 2/10/07 . chapter 1
| novelist742 1/23/07 . chapter 1
That is definitely cute. I enjoyed the little oneshot. . It made me very happy!
And that little phrase about the Uchiha name blooming w/ a new bud was very poetic.
Now, let's click the favorite stories list and put it in there...WALLA. It's now there.
| nothing but blue 11/15/06 . chapter 1
sniffles. that was beautiful!
| o.O 11/15/06 . chapter 1
it's really good...does anyone the the fanfiction about tenten and neji where she is using tessen and when neji kisses her at the end she hits him over the head with it? D
| DemonGirl11 11/9/06 . chapter 1
I have to say that this was very well-written. You had a good extended meetaphor going.
| Sakurabear47 11/9/06 . chapter 1
yihee! i love this! super!
| lumoslumiere 11/8/06 . chapter 1
Wow! This is beautiful, I love the way you write and characterize Sasuke. As a writer of SasuSaku myself I find it very hard to find the right characterization of Sasuke and maintain it, but you do a great job at it. Not only that, the plot was just really good. :D
BTW, I also love your Neji/Tenten works.
| dreamlifter 11/8/06 . chapter 1
Very well written. I liked how Sakura was depicted and Sasuke too. If there is a criticism I would have to say the analogy to autumn leaf just didn't work for me. Felt kinda forced. The story itself was very strong. Although I don't think anyone *but* sakura and naruto, live. It was a cool story.
One thing that would make the story better was if you take out the line about sasuke looking back years later. The reader & story will have suspense about what sakura will do or if sasuke will live through this encounter without that line. With it in there, most of the tension was killed.
As always, great job
| GraphiteHeron 11/7/06 . chapter 1
This was rather open-ended, and yet it ties off so well. Room to stop, and room to continue as the fancy catches you. I don't know if I've ever read such a good ending to any given story. I know it's a strange part of the story to obsess over - the closing - but you managed something incredibly unique, rare even. What comes before the closing is just as exquisite. Balance, imagery, rhythm, and it flows from beginning to end smoothly. This, it defies description, and somehow, saying, "Wow, this is really good," seems hollow. Empty. Inadequate.
| 2supersmart 11/7/06 . chapter 1
wow totally awesome and well-written. i like your nejiten fics a lot too; it's my second fav couple...or at least the second largest amount of fics i read are nejitens. i'm really glad you decided to write a sasusaku though
| hushhushyou 11/7/06 . chapter 1
That was very profound. I liked your analogy. (I'm not sure if I should call it that? Or a metaphor? I dunno lol) Anyway, very well done! I loved it :D
| iMissa 11/7/06 . chapter 1
Ack yayerz! I loved it! The characters were really ic, and I could definately see this happening. Great job!
| Crystal Koneko 11/7/06 . chapter 1