THIS IS SERIOUSLY AMAZING
you took my breath away! Please do keep writing, I was indignant to see that this only had 23 reviews!! Honestly honestly I fell in love with your Harry, enough to pathetically find ways to cast myself into the Potterverse because of you.

It was beautiful, you potrayed him so richly and wonderfully. True to character but even better than JK to make him absolutely lovable. please keep one reading.

the only thing I can say is that perhaps Hermione's character was a bit on the short side, but granted the story could not be what it is if Hermione was any bit stronger. So props to making it a bit different.

Would it be too much for you to write a sequel? I would adore adore it!
RAH RAH TO RAH NEE!! you are one talented fanficer

Wow..My 2 fave ships in a fic!! Oh yeahh..!(Hhr && Dramione)
Really , I love it. It's so.clever and well..I just love it. Im going 2 hav 2 read more of your stories now..Well better check out your page, you might hear from me again in a fic ;)
haha, brill story!
x Dramione4Lyf x

This was sweet and so well written. You should write a multi chaptered Harry/Hermione story. You're so good at it. Great job!

Nicely done! Well-written, true to characters, well-paced, and enjoyable.

And let me tell you, generally, I don't like spawn-fics!

That was so good I read it twice. It wasn't till later that I found myself wondering how Draco had died and what Harry did for a living. The cool thing about your story is that even though we don't have those details nothing is really missing.

Ahh, cute! Love that last line!

"The waves threw themselves on the rocks below and flung spray up to sprinkle droplets that sparkled like diamonds in her hair." Great image there...just like a film :D

And the bit about Theo inheriting is father's modesty was really funny, I could just see Harry saying that!

Nice one!

I don't usually read Hermione stories, because she's like the Scarlet Johannson of fan fiction characters, the 'it' girl paired with every leading man imaginable, young and old, in every kind of story possible.

Saying that, I read yours only because you're the writer, :D, and I'm glad I did.

I enjoyed the plot, and think that taken out of the Wizarding world, and put in a Muggle setting (FBI, CIA, Military instead of the Order) would make a great contemporary romance! So if you ever want to use some of those precious few 'quiet moments' of your day to write original fiction, I think you'd be happy with the results!

Very nice. Rated at two teardrops.

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This is the first H/Hr fic I've ever read (as D/Hr is my OTP as well), but I've always been intrigued by the pairing as it seems to make so much SENSE, considering the books and now the movies! But I was always so distracted by and too busy reading all the Dramione in this fandom, and practically all the Dramione I've read features, rather ironically I think, considering how vastly UN-canon DMHG is, the very canon Harry/Ginny pairing.

Anyway, WOW, what an introduction to the pairing! This fic was so perfect. I can't fathom how Hermione could've resisted Harry for so long. The very slow (but not too slow), gradual progression of the relationship from platonic to not-so-platonic was very well done and realistically portrayed. And Harry as a father figure was just too cute! Beautifully written fic.

So sweet! I've gone all teary eyed. Not very constructive I know but I can't think at the moment.

I really like how you made Hermione's and Harry's relationship gradual. The way Theo looked up to Harry as his father was really sweet. I'm glad they got togther in the end. Til later readings

*completely starry eyed*

I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVED this fic!

I'm a huge Harry/Hermione fan, but I loved the input of Draco+Hermione.

This fic was really well written! I haven't read a great HP fic in a long time.

I'm definitly adding this story to my Fav. Stories list!

Great job!

Wonderful story!

~*Eli

I know this is a one-shot, but I think this story can further.

wow this story rovked and im glad you didn't make Theo walk in on them that always seems to happen in fics and i think it ruins the moment, again great story i like the pumpkin carving competition im gonna convince my mum to let us do that next year