Great story, really interesting take on Sam in the episode.

That was really great! :D

I am so grateful that you explored this tag on to 'No Exit' - helping to fill in the moments where a sidelined Sam, alone, hurting and very much still trying to deal what has been thrown at him since his father's death finally explodes. The dry wall didn't stand a chance...! Great stuff, please write more soon.

Holy-oh wow, that was good. Sorry it took me a couple days to review this, been busy, but I loved it! I missed Sam in that ep too, and this was just great. And yeah, like someone said, the visual of Sam with a sledgehammer and whacking away...m. Anyways, I could picture this clearly happening, and it was a perfect missing scene, and I could go on but I'd just be echoing the other reviews. I have to say though, this last ep was much much better for a Sam fan. But yeah, Jo ticked me off too-is it mean to have thought while watching the ep that if she died I'd just go "oh well"? Um, I'll shut up now. Good job, please write some more stuff soon :)

Nice work! I've been wondering for ages when Sam is gonna start grieving! Loved it!

Nice! Great inner look at Sam's thoughts and feelings, or what could have been going through his head. Personally... I can't stand Jo. I honestly, truly gave her the benefit of the doubt, but no. I do not like her. Ellen I like, Jo not so much. I loved how this really truly could have been a scene! I mean, you really didn't change the story at all, just added to it. A lot of missing scenes you read change the original story in some way, but this one could have honestly been just a missing scene. And of course... Sam beating the crap out of a wall with a sledge hammer... who doesn't like that visual ;) Great introspection! I was really missing Sam in No Exit; so it was nice to read this and easily believe that this happened to bring him back into the episode.

Now... that's not to say I wouldn't mind seeing more to this ;) Maybe a continuation of this, making your story line now. Honestly? ...I'm just trying to drag another story out of you because you're such a good writer! Great job on this one! Later :*

Great. Now I feel bad 'cuz Sam didn't get much air time and 'cuz he dislikes himself... Heh, awesome story! It was saddish and angstyish and all sort of goodyish things and I liked it! YAY!

I loved this tag, you wrote it wonderfully :).

I am also really upset about the lack of Sam we got in that episode. Thankfully we won't be getting any Jo too soon. :)

PS. Are you going to write a sequel to 'The Common Cold'. :D

Hey!

I've read and rec'ced your fanfic in my comm, I hope you don't mind!

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Lali

awesome job. Sam was so left out of the episode. You did a great job. I would love to see a sequel...

Aw, poor Sam. I liked this story, thanks for sharing it:)

poor sammy... i missed him in this episode too... good little tag looking forward to more of them

Wow, great job! Sam's absence in NE really bugged the hell out of me, so this was a good read!

I also have to say: well done for not going over the top with the Jo-bashing! If it was me, I wouldn't have been able to resist the temptation! O I really do hate her, lol!

Hello. Carocali suggested I look at this. Even though I am COMPLETELY satisfied with Kripke's version of NE, I'll have to admit you present a well written and interesting version of what we might have seen on the tube.

Just remember, Kripke is the fellow who does OWN the Winchesters and he has "dibs" on the storyline. He really hasn't done such a bad job - has he? If he hadn't, we all might be reduced to watching "Law and Order: The Parole Board" or re-runs of "Gilligan's Island."

Great tag! Sam's absence really annoyed me in No Exit even more so as he was replaced by that infuriating girl. At least we have fanfiction to focus on Sam's perspective and feelings - 'cos we're not getting that on the show at the moment.