that was so sweet and angsty! tofuu for the win!

very very introspective.

that was so sad! poor tokiya.

what a coward! why does he have to leave her?

if love isn't enough, then the world will be a lonely place...

he should have stayed... he's making her feel small...

anyway, you've got some pretty amazing style there, using tokiya's pov to narrate his feelings. course, he wouldn't really know what she thinks now, eh? and that makes it even more credulous cause them we have to think like tokiya. oh... am getting so engrossed in this. wow! you really made me appreciate the dialogue and the long paragraphs... cause tokiya is so much like a reserved person... aw... love it!

AW! That was awesome!

It was short, but very sweet!

*Sniff* So sad! TT

Sad... So sad! TT

I didin't think that she could go with Kurei, but this is all a fic, and ut's interesting how Mi-Chan acted!

Wow, I really like this!

KAWAII! i LOVE it! but too much drama...but anyway it was very nice..you potrayed his feelings with a depth unimaginable wow! loved it keep writing!

ah! kurei! yuck! but ur fic so no offense...but waah! toki is leaving! darling mi-chan is running away...AGAIN! you'd think he understood it wasn't the answer but no! he just has to leave!

i like it and you do have a point lol we really dont know what he's thinking lol so well...i liked it a lot! but i prefer happy fics cuz i myself write too many sad ones lol

Nice!

Very good.

*was kissing Kurei passionately* Huh? Oh.. *flashes the ring on her right finger* You don't have to tell me that..*smiles sweetly* we're already married..bwahahahaha...

I like the chapter! It made me giddy!.. I'm so glad it's not sad.. though Mi-chan was really stupid I'm glad it all worked out for the best..hahahaha...

Congratulations on making a very good story...*hugs*

Now I'm off reading frost!.. yay!

omg, omg, omg... they're no married! yippie! i love you!

oh wow.. that almost gave me a heart attack. now our fav tofuu can be together. mi-chan is so obtuse, he should have just eloped with fuuko already! i mean, c'mon! she left a guy at the altar for you, are you too dumb to see that? *growls*

next chapter please? ;)