GREAT FIC!

that was cool i liked it you should i dunno continue!

Good chapter, I'm impressed. Good idea on the line about near misses. Very good indeed. Keep it up.

I think I've read this before, but I'll review it anyway.

It's really good, though perhaps (if possible) more Remus would make a GREAT improvement (I always say that to everyone!)

:-)

that was so sweet and cute, i enjoyed that very much keep up w/the writing!

This is just too cute for words!

She was lucky, that's for sure.

once again very good. Poor book, and poor maruders.

I looked at the summary and thought 'Cool! A Forbidden Forest fic!'. But, really, this is *so* much more. For a short story, it really moved me. Your style of writing is incredible, and your descriptions hauned me. The whole story seems to move in a blurry, dreamlike pace (especially the scene in the Forest), which is extremely cool. You've got what we know of MWPP down pat. Only a slight nitpick... Bertha Jorkins was a couple of years older than the Marauders. Great job!

GREAT STORY! Very original idea and the characters all spot-on. Lily is delightfully spunky. I love fill-in-the-cracks stories, and that statement of Lupin's about the "near misses" has intrigued me since I read PoA.

Wow...

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw... I like the lion... And I'm guessing that Remus was the werewolf and James was the Stag?

Ah! Good, great, wonderful, how many ways can I say it? I LOVED THIS STORY! _ This was really good, it's going on my faves, i'm really hyper, and keep writing! _

Neat.

Very nice... I liked the interaction between the characters, especially between Remus and Lily. The scene where Prongs saves Lily was very well done, and I especially liked the part where Lily reached out to touch him... very reminiscent of Harry and his Patronus in PoA. (I also liked the Gryffindor mascot- I want one! :)