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| Sand Fox 2007-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis is very good work. Darc is certainly in character. As for Lilia, she’s pretty hard to write about, because the game wasn’t very detailed with her speech patterns and all, but I think you did a good job. I really like Darc/Lilia pairings, but there are so little good ones here. But this one is great. I’m adding it to my favs! |
| Toki 2006-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseHehe..I like your story. Darc seems to be in character. As for Lilia...the game doesn't really show her personality that much, and I don't know if she's the type that smiles all the time although she's feeling horrible. Anyway...good one! |
| BuBBLe Tea BaBe 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abusePlease write more it's so rare to find Darc and Lillia stories where she isn't bashed...aw so sweet I loved it toattly need more Fanfics with these two. |
| araiey 2006-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay, Meelu returns to Arc the Lad with an excellent one-shot! (...at least I think it's a one-shot...) I found the story to be plotted and paced very well; the characterization was a delight, I especially loved the tone of Darc's thoughts which was a nice mix of exasperation and annoyance. Lilia's a harder one to flesh out as you don't really get to see how she thinks in the game, aside from "Must stop Darkham", "Must convince Darc that he has a brother", and of course "Must stop the fighting". But I do love her though moreso because of her interactions with Darc's team. My favorite part would be the throw-away line of the Deimos team's eating habits. All in all, I love this story! (But still, HOW in the world did they get to Cragh Island?) |
| Firble 2006-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseMeelu's back wo! Love it so far! *impatiently waits for more* ^_^ |
| Elf Wench1 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseAnnoying Little Weed, huh? *Snickers* Lilia better just hope Darc doesn't catch on that she drugged him or she might end up mulch. Interesting start...it is a start right? (I got first review!) Unfortunately it's not to hard to do in theis fandom. Well, hoping for more. Elfwench |