Reviews for Something To Live For

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Sentinel103 2008-08-15 ch 1,	abuseI read this story this morning before work and didn't have time leave a review then, so I read it again tonight. Very well done, Kim did find a bit of Ron to live for. And we think that when it's her time Ron will be the first one she sees, because Ron promised her. Thanks, Larry (Sentinel 103)
Mr. Wizard 2007-12-17 ch 1,	abuseVery moving, I found it most believeable in pacing and dialog. It hurt to see Ron go like that. The consolation was unexpected and sweet.
screaming phoenix 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseWell done Sir: And Thank You.
fatherfigure1 2007-06-03 ch 1,	abuseNice twist from the old standard deathfic. The ending is perfect, Ron does live on, Kim finds a reason to live, their love is forever, thru their little girl. Others could take a lesson from this. Gerald
bigherb81 2007-05-12 ch 1,	abuseGreat story man I know it's rough killing off your favorite character it's rough reading it. Appreciate the effort that you put into this story though and good call on the guardian angel thing too. By the way if you want to know about the "doing it" while dying thing check out a little hentai I like to call "Bible Black" watch the whole series it's pretty good. Later much.
Netherwood 2007-05-02 ch 1,	abuseDefinitely one of the best one-shot deathfics I've read. You kept my attention and emotions from the first word to the last. I'm not quite sure about the part where Kim and Ron are singing together... but if that's the weakest part of the story, it's still very powerful. Kim's reaction to the hard truth is very well-done. Someone who's accustomed to being able to do anything would be very much in denial at first when she comes up against a sitch she can't fix, and then determined to have as much of her way as she can, then determined to go down with Ron when it's hit the point that she absolutely can't do anything to control or fix the situation, and then once Ron's slapped her out of it she'll keep going despite the ultimate defeat. That progression was very well thought out. ...tell me you thought it out. Please tell me you didn't pull such excellent characterization off the top of your head. If you say you pulled it off the top of your head, I will cry. ;)
annika 2007-04-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh my god i hate you how can you kill him! ok...i don't actually hate you cause it was like an awesome fic but can you somehow make an alternate ending in which he lives...maybe they leave him on the island but the some tribe comes and gets him alive and he manages to go back but only after a few years and then is reunited with the baby!
Danny-171984 2007-04-21 ch 1,	abuseI hate deathfics. Truly sad. I had tears, TEARS! You did a terrific job at writing this. The only thing that help my sad mood was knowing that a little bit of Ron was past down. Keep on writing. Danny P.S. I totally agree with you with those songs. When I'm doing I lisent to those kind of songs...
Pojko 2007-03-26 ch 1,	abuseI read this story this morning, and it kept popping into my head all day. The more I thought about it, the sadder I became. I guess that's a sign that you're an awesome writer. Fantastic story, and keep up the good work.
CMY 2007-03-25 ch 1,	abuseNO MORE OF THESE DEATHFICS, DAMNMIT, NO MORE! ENOUGH OF THESE! You will NOT write any more of these kind of fanfics. Your talent is a deadly weapon on the emotional chamber of the brain. Don't you dare fire that writing-skill bullet into it. I mean it. I can't stand these deathfics. No. More...Please? I can't handle stories that go like this...
dennisud 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseSimply well done! dennisud
Tragic warrior 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseSad story. I enjoyed reading and liked how Kim and Ron talked about the secrets they knew before Ron died. At least his legacy will live on through his daughter. If you give any of my stories a read write a review and tell me what you think.
Solarstone 2006-12-24 ch 1,	abuseVery touching. I especially liked the part just before Ron dies. The thought processes running through his head, that's so like Ron!
CastaS 2006-12-20 ch 1,	abusegreat story, i enjoyed it.
RI100014 2006-12-03 ch 1,	abuseI'm an asshole: I really am. I came to read this piece wanting to cry, wanting to bawl like a infant;, to let ou all the pain I've kept reliving for the last two weeks. But I couldn't. I don't know why, I goddamn don't understand it. I've lost my Skiziks, my lovable old newf of over 14 years. Who's been with me through thick and thin, lived in over five countries, wrestled with me with I was happy, nuzzled me when I was hurt, let me hug her tight when I've cried because I was in so much pain. Yet not a single drop escaped me as I read this piece. I'm such an asshole. And I'm sorry.. I'll go now. Till next time...adios.

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