hey hu was da othr person sposd ta be?!?!?

I like this could you continue it? -puppy eyes- just maybe?

Awe! It WAS good! You need confidence in your sequals and they'll be awesome! now you need a trilogy. You should write them confessing for each other!

of course it's their business! if they're his friends it's their business that everyone else is making poor naruto miserable! find out; help him!
~ahem~ yes, rant over.
amusing fic. i can't think of anyone who would fit the description of the other person, but that was okay. it still worked.

DUDE THE OTHER PERSON IS TOTALLY KENSHIN! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

good fic

aww that is so cute!!

It's like Sai, except more descent... i'll shut up now.

I like it.

^^! youre so a great author!! i love your stories!

This was a pretty good short story, poor Sasuke and his obbsession with orange things...I'll give you 10/10 for this work...keep it up...

Sweet. That's what I would call this because despite all the glaring and stuff, underneath it all, it's just... very sweet. Nice job. I actually had to go back to read the original, but there is a similarity between the two, I think this one was pretty good as well.

XD I liked how you added in a ranting Sasuke and managed to get out so much about Naruto.

I didn't find it that hard to follow! And I like it. I kinda imagined him talking to Shikamaru... and I have no clue why... O.o
I like the end. "He wouldn't be Naruto if he didn't." Even if it's onesided, t'was very sweet. ^.^
You just go rant your heart out Sasuke!
~Mist