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| Xx_SadoMasochist_xX 2008-09-14 ch 27, anon. | abuseI absolutely love this story. I just read the entire thing and I'm absolutely addicted. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Black-Dranzer-1119 2008-09-13 ch 27, | abuseThis sis so awesome so far. I love it. I hope you continue this because I really can't wait to read what will happen next. I am really curious to find out what L is planning. |
| turquoisetoes 2008-09-10 ch 27, | abuseomgoshh this is the most amazing death note fic i've read! i really can't wait until you continue this. |
| cherryi 2008-08-22 ch 27, | abusewow one of the best Death Note stories ever! though really said about how Light became good for L and L became bad for him! aww! =( that's so ironic! can't wait for an update! plz! |
| Raxel 2008-08-20 ch 27, anon. | abuseFinally managed to track down this fic. It's definitely one of the most intriguing and in my instance, sought after pieces I've stumbled across. And I can only grieve to wonder if you will be updating in the not to distant future. Please, I can hardly wait for the plot to unfold…. Well, enough lamenting over the time between updates. I love how seemingly effortlessly you’ve managed to pull off so many characters, their interactions and plot development, without dropping the entire balance. Too many times one is sacrificed in an effort to force the others into existence… yet your language doesn’t even hint to such cheapening. Definitely an admirable skill. Hoping again, that you haven’t “outgrown” this fic I can only wait to see what will unfold. Thanks for the read, Rax |
| dragongirl17 2008-08-19 ch 27, anon. | abuseur story is amazing make a new chapter i want to read more |
| Cween Almond 2008-07-14 ch 27, | abuseHoly.Shit. I read this entire thing in...*tries to count* No idea how many hours but it was less than 24. For me...that's fast. That also means this story is fucking amazing. I love it. It saddens me and makes me happy at the same time @.@ You haven't updated since December! Please update soon! When you can. I really hope no one has to die [well...no one else] at the end >_< I know it's probably pathetic of me to want a happy ending...or not as tragic anyway...I guess I have to wait and find out. Once again, well fucking done! |
| .'.'.yUe-hEiKa.'.'. 2008-07-11 ch 7, | abusekya! |
| Kitty-Katz-Katz 2008-07-07 ch 27, | abuseI'm having a little difficulty breathing. This is a fantastic piece of work. Well... I kind of have to... skip over the more graphic parts. xP But the plot is excellent and I sincerely hope that you'll decide to update sometime soon. |
| Sioen 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseSorry, but... i don't know what to say. You know, yes, yes... yes! i really don't what to say now. Oh yes, i'm speechless. ... 'kay then, i just wanna say I love you so much, please come back to us, update this beautiful sto..no, not beutiful, more than beautiful, more than fantastic, more than briliant, that's why i 'm so speechless. This is the first time i'm so speechless like this, after reading a very great fanfiction of my beloved pairing, LightxLawliet. But you know, your story is really sad, even i want you to update so badly, i don't know if i can stand the ending.. haha, because i know, i don't why i'm thinking now since reading a chapter about L's drawing and now reading the last chapter, about L being Kira. I must say, in the end of this story, looks like the ending will be very sad, L will die with a tragic pose kissing Light before he died, like his drawing. Beautiful but very sad. Well i just hope you will come back and prove it that my negative thinking is false. Happy ending is a must for Light Yagami and L Lawliet, no matter what, if L died, Light must dead too, together, forever. That's all i can say. Really. Oh my God. I love you so much, Nirah. I'll be waiting for you, forever. Keep your spirit And take care, my lady :) With love, Sioen |
| Ireina Kurotsuki 2008-07-02 ch 27, | abuseOMFG, you seriously must write more ASAP- I completely love your plot, it's rare you have Light turning good, and L turning into Kira for love. Usually Light just turns good, but L doesn't change. I love how you invented their life-stories- utterly believable (if you don't know their real ones) and touchingly beautiful and heartbreaking all at the same time. To put it short- You. Need. To. Update. Anyway, hoping I've not been annoying! Smile! ^__^ ~Ireina |
| Paradoux 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMFG I really love your fic!! I've read it about 27,0 times it is so good! ^~^ I've been waiting for new chapters though for a while... Please continue with this! It is killing me not knowing what is happening! ^~^ Keep up the good work! |
| KitVis7 2008-06-24 ch 3, | abuseOkay, Favorite parts... LARENZO! Bwa ha ha! Oh my goodness that whole scene was so sweet. I noticed the hand twitch, Will Light help it some way with L's pain?!?!?! This chapter is LOVE. ...Who IS D?? -kit |
| KitVis7 2008-06-24 ch 27, | abuseOkay, I saw that you haven't updated in a long while, and i recently got a account so i decided to review!! sorry it took so long. =( I've been reading this for a month or two- actually when i found it i could't tear me eyes away from it! I read all the chapters in one, LONG sitting.Honestly I... I've fallen in love!! Is that possible? *laughs* I've really seriously enjoyed the story you've woven. You've taken two interesting characters and brought them to life, made them HUMAN. I've laughed at L's quirky insistances, and Light's reluctant mothering in the early chapters. I've grown curious about L's family, and this chapter made me punch the air in victory. The family ties you've formed between L and Near have entranced me, and i adore your OCs(?) Light- whom I have conflicting feelings for in the series- Is perfect, in his own Light way. L is so deeply strewn, so alive. You have a gift for plot, seriously. I have NO idea how you're going to Tie this up, but hopefully you won't anytime soon. Waiting for you to return, and hoping you take my compliments! -kit |
| dreamsofpalmtrees 2008-06-23 ch 27, | abuseoh. my. god. please update soon! i just spent my entire day reading this on the couch!! lol. gah, theres a reason this is in the suspense catagory! i need to know what happens! please let it have a happy ending! update! |