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Reviews for: Juma
Ewanlover64
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Haha, excellent! Funny oneshot! Poor Mical, though, always being picked on and teased.
rinslet
2006-11-21 . chapter 1
lol, poor disciple
hey! it's been a while since you updated Destiny's pawn! TT_TT please do so soon
La Belladonna
2006-11-08 . chapter 1
This was really good. The characterizations were great and the dialogue flowed nicely. I love the idea of Mical analyzing his hangover from a textbook point of view. It works really well for him. And the little twist at the end is nice.

Very nice work. Thanks for sharing!
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