lolololololololol
awesomeness

It's cute.

Ahha, that was so very cute!
I love short stories that work out nicely.
I can so see Pietro doing that, and it's funny.
|D

this was great i was giggling the whole tiem

oh this made me laugh so much! Really funny, you've got their characters written perfectly.

The only constructive crit I can think of is that toad seems to be yo-ing every sentance, but then i'm not certain how he's meant to talk anyway so meh.

Gorgeous story, and really funny.

This is the best story I've read this year. Made my day. :D

*is frightened* Somehow I can see Pietro doing exactly this...oh gods, what if he dared himself to kiss all of the X-Men? Including the New Mutants? *horrified at thought*

Heh, i've always had a bit of a fondness to Toad, though I never actually been sure why. Huh... Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that this is the very first x-men fanfic that I have EVER read! And if all these fanfics are as good as this one, then i'm gonna be losing LOADS of sleep and study time in the near future... BWAHAHAHA!

I liked this, keep writing. There's not enough good slash.

good story, but kind of disgusting!

bhahahaha i think the most amusing thing was just pietro making random dares for himself. hahahha. lance's little thing cracked me up too. 'woot!' hahahahhaahha. but the stuff that cracked me up the most was wutev was going on in tro's head.. crazy dude. manN. ahaha hope u write more... !