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   Tragon 10/9/11 . chapter 1So good yet so sad she dies! |
| A Nameless Nobody 7/14/11 . chapter 1 I. Loved. It. Like all of your stories, it was dark, twisted... And absolutely delicious. Call be a frickin physco bitch or whatever but I thoguht it was quite funny at the end. Actually, my wierd ass cracked up. Brilliant, angel puppeteer, just brilliant. |
| Evil-Chibi-Tiffy 7/12/11 . chapter 1 Awww… that was sad. :'( poor Sasuke! This oneshots gonna make me cry… |
| Breezybiatch 7/11/11 . chapter 1 I mean, it could have potentially been a great story. But the tone is way off. It's ... it lacks maturity. And it's doesnt flow. The beginning and the end seem taken apart from two different stories. I mean, is this supposed to be sweet? I don't get why she would die in 24 hours and from what and why he wouldnt have know way in advance and why she'd chose to do this, not only that, why lead him on? What would he gain? In the end she new she would not marry him even if he DID follow through on his bargain, so in the end she's the one who broke the promis. I dunno, I'm giving this story to much thought and it really does not deserve it. |
| miniKa 6/18/11 . chapter 1 Someone heal my heart! I CAN'T STAND IT! *sob* |
| alphaladywolf 6/12/11 . chapter 1 How did she die? Really sad and unexpected ending. |
| Ekun-Asha 4/20/11 . chapter 1 ... How... Considerate. |
| florever 1/31/11 . chapter 1 omg...frickin sad. T_T |
| animekraze 1/24/11 . chapter 1 To sum it up: strange. Is it, quite possibly, a troll fic? Maybe. Is it serious? Perhaps. In the end, it's a huge wall banger. It's unexpected-that's the strong point. There's a weird poignancy that follows after the last line. The fic itself has a strange pace. It flows like any other at first, then slips into something desperate. The ending is dark, but handled oddly lightly. It's something to read, you're opinion on its quality. |
| nartog 1/22/11 . chapter 1 ok an interesting story but a huge plothole , i mean how did she die ? Did she comit suicide , had cancer , heart failure . Dont get me wrong i get the story's moral but the no explanation death kinda ruins it for me . |
| rainbow spell 1/21/11 . chapter 1 God you're so...diabolical! |
| 0.0' Kahli hime 1/18/11 . chapter 1 oh god... she died? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO oh please... that was so sad... D; Poor sasuke-kun D; |
| Wisteria Oleander 12/28/10 . chapter 1 Wh-what? O.o Is she...? how poor Sasuke... |
| MiMi 12/27/10 . chapter 1 sakura died in the end? how? she let sasuke practice what will it be like without her. and, he doesn't carry it out well aww. this is sad... :( especially the part: "You made it, Sasuke-kun! Can you do it again everyday?" |
| ckstar98 12/26/10 . chapter 1 WAH! SO SAD SO ROMANTIC |
