LOL! I take it the 'Afterwars' is part of the manga aftereards?

HA!

nice and funny

Well done!

Nice. Poor Nao. :P

However... I don't see this clashing with a fic on Manga Shizuru courting Natsuki... so err... update soon? *grins*

Thanks again.

Very impressive! Using Chie to give an 'aftermath' sort of story was a good choice! The investigation process was quite funny (Mikoto is so cute!) and Shizuru's manipulations of her surroundings never cease to amaze me.

Great Job on this chapter! If you get a chance, I think you could still pull off a Natsuki getting courted by Shizuru...with Nao's little secret being in the background^-~

Till Next Time,

ToaR

Haha, I loved Chie investigating them :]

Oh, that was good. Now, I think you should have the cast discussing that chapter instead of the manga... I'm especially looking forward to see how Nao reacts about Shizuru revealing she's really a virgin.

wow I love it, alway love when Shizuru show her feeling ^^b please update more

yay ^^ -hugs author- loved it ^^ T.T really i hate the manga so much T.T stupid ppl what where they thinking doing that T.T anyway loved it ^^

End? Does it mean end of chapter all whole thing/ I hope chapter^^ Because I want to see more^^ MMaybe you will be able to make me like manga a little XD Although I really hate it for destroying Natsuki's character >_

My comment of the first 3 chapters:

Brilliant. It was funny and I enjoyed the cross over. I especially loved the comments regarding the Otome "scabs", flippin awesome.

The 4th chapter:

I hope you continue with it. I think you could really run with it and make an excellent fic out of it because it certainly doesn't feel over. It would be a different spin from what we've read before, especially because most of the writers stick to the anime. It would be awesome to incorporate the manga and anime under one story. I love Chie and Aoi together as well, of course not as much as I love Natsuki and Shizuru, but they are certainly fun as well. Have you considered continuing it?

er...what manga?
o.O which one?? -kinda confused-

A good dose of Shiznat medicine to dull the pain that is the Mai Hime manga. I salute you on a good well done.

First, this was a great chapter! Funny and it does address many of the interesting points in the 3rd manga.

Second, PLEASE, write a Natsuki/Shizuru fic for the manga (kitten eyes)

^-^ I always enjoy reading your stories and it hasn't changed this year either!

Thanks!

ToaR

ha ha the last lines are great...lol this is a great story, i kinda wish it wasnt over lol, makes me wanna pick up the manga now