I am sorry for such a late review on this chapter.

I've read this one, over and over. Everytime that we leave to go out some where, I bring my phone along, just so I can re-read it again.

There is just something about it, that makes me want to keep reading it. I've said it many times before, but, Your work is just amazing.

I thank you for not giving up on Folly and Sin, even all the times that you had writers block, you still put out a chapter (and, they were always amazing).

So thank you again, for the wonderful stories.

You are so awesome!

i love this story u have a rl nice style, that is easy to read and its just larous at times, but also sad enough to make me sheda tear in the right places.
don't worry as far as i can tell ur characters aint OOC i feel they are as they should be, still awkward and uncertain even if they decide they are more than friends
the story line so far is gripping and good so, yea i say the writer's block is only an excuse for u too update slower hehe, the story seems too good to be written on block, unless ur just that good xD
Another one of ur fears the grammar and the spelling, im too engrossed in the story to take much notice of that so far i'd say ur okay ;)

so yea keep up the good work, hope ull update soon

and love,
marysia

AH! I love it!! XD For once I'm in love with a cliffie! It was beyond perfect!! Those last few lines were my favorite!

"Riffle made the irrevocable mistake of meeting Kazu’s eyes.

They were fierce with bubbling hatred and enveloped in shadows, framed by his hair and the creases of an angered expression. His head was low but his eyes were locked onto him, full of every ounce of loathing imaginable and making absolutely, positively, unmistakably sure… that Riffle was looking straight at him when he licked his lips and mouthed three… little… words…

I would win." *dies* Awesome!XD

I don't think you made them too ooc. I think because something like this hasn't really happened then no one really knows what would happen or how the characters would really act. I think what you did best represents what might actually happen.


I can't wait for the next chapter!! I'm so happy I finally got enough hw done so I could finally check to see if there were updates. *in her happy place*

Well, this was a very good chapter indeed ! I've liked the tense atmosphere you've set all along and my mind was struggling whith this huge delemna : "I wish they could get out of there uncaught and though, I'll be disappointed if they actually do so...".

Yet I'll have two little criticisms to utter : first, I think Ikki should have tried an empty room before finding Kazu. You've really stressed the fact that there were so many options and places to look in inside this huge factory that you made it even harder to believe Ikki would find Kazu so easily. And then, once again, you've highlighted a lot Kazu's physical mistreatment thus it seemed impossible to me he was even able to walk. While he was being beaten up, I couldn't help thinking "Hell, they're gonna kill him if they keep on like that!" so I was bewildered to read that Kazu "hadn't lost so much blood" and that he could walk by his own.

But in spite of this, I've really enjoyed this chapter and I don't think you've made an OOC. Of course, these characters are a bit different from the ones in the anime (or in the manga) but story telling is about people changing, isn't it ? They go through new events and they change. Of course, you've got to make it believable and in concordance with their initial personae, which you've done wonderfully up to now. If we were opposed to any evolution, to any difference from the book, we could argue that their falling in love is an OOC. ^^ In short: don't worry, you're doing a great job !

And by the way, I read the "warning" everytime. Just in case... ^^

You updated so quick this time I almost didn't notice it! And I see I missed wishing the story a happy birthday too...
The chapter was great, I love it when Ikki and Kazu are together, and they've been apart for too many chapters!
And I see Ikki made one of those Hero movie mistakes: Never get rid of your weapon! I don't know if you'll have him get that pole back or not, but the thought of Ikki bringing some bad guys to justice with a metal pole is so amusing.

Yes! It's so amazing! I haven't checked my email/fanfic in a while and I found this update at the best time possible!! I was so excited to find this update, and I must say, this chappie is amazing-rific! Way to go, and good luck with writing the next one. I'm sure it will be just as awesome-sauce as this one. Oh, and poor Riffle, he had a fatal error. XD

Oh snap! Lol i've totally never even read air gear, but i love this fic and this pairing. Their personalities just fit so great together. But then again, that could just be the way you write them. I wouldn't know :-). Please update soon! That's an insane cliffhanger.

I must say... the last part totally did it for me. That's it, you're officially a GENIUS! ;D I'm gonna stick around like a puddle of goo on the wall.

Really. This chapter can make up for all your "troublesome" chapters, although I think they all rock. Can't say I spotted any spelling errors, so you can pat yourself on the back good job, because the writing is so good that errors aren't noticable. >.< Ikki in this chapter sure showed his more caring and not so coarse side; *love* it's totally awesome when you see how worried he is about Kazu~

And I think Kazu suffered enough. Be nice to him in the next chapter ok? Ah~ now you've really got me hooked. The suspense- it's killing me!

Okay, I'm trying to think of something intelligent to say but it's not so easy when I listened to a whole day's talk about what subjects to chose for the coming two years before I graduate. T_T So thank you for this story.

OH! And sorry for the late congrats. Happy birthday to you~ Happy birthday to you~ Happy birthday (to the ficcie and the author just becuz you wrote it), Happy birthday to you! ;D There. Hope you liked the singing.

XD Until next time~

Can Kazu beat Riffle- hell he will *cheers* :)

Nyah!!
That was great!! Who could imagine Ikki would get caught like that?
and, aw, Kazu!! My fingers started to ache :( So brave..
his words really saved Ikki!! Nyah )

I love your ffics ^^ I truly love how you describe the feelings.. It makes me feel so sweet.

Hahaha, thank you! :]
I kind of wish I had it back...and I kind of don't mind. >w< It's refreshing.
Also--HAPPY BIRTHDAY FaS! :D

Ikki+metal pipe= OH GOD RUN.

Aw, poor Kazu. He's so adorable and helpless. w<
Can't wait until you update again.
Thanks for continuing to write this story for so long!

I really liked how you ended this chapter and I'm really excited to see what happens next! I don't think Kazu is in a great condition to race though :( at least, if that is what you have in mind :) I also enjoyed how Ikki found his way to Kazu and was elated to see them finally reunited!

Oh... dun dun DUN O.O. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the awesome work. ^.^

Oh my god HI! *glomp* It's been so long , I'm so so so so so so sorry. To cut it short, lack of internet, college, and generally life kinda got in the way of me being able to access my favourite fan fics, but dont you think for one second that I forgot about this story! I just feel horrible for being so rushed as to not have time to leave any reviews, until now, I'm terribly terribly sorry. *pleads for forgiveness*
Onto the actual story... I still rate this as the best Ikki/Kazu fic ive read so far , its just ... flawless i love it to bits XD And its well worth all the waiting, so dont feel bad about that :D I have so much to say and i have no idea where to start or even if i should id be here all night the last time i reveiwed was so long ago and so much has happned... But as for this chapter, 1) yay you updated so quickly im so happy! and 2) I think you did a great job ^^ I love how you always portray ikki and kazu how id imagine them , which is pretty realistic and down to earth, because the movies /do/ get it all wrong, and if any of us had to walk into an abandoned warehouse fillied with creeps albeit to save our bestfriend/love interest we would not super man in there, and you got the cautiouness Vs urgeny just right and the tension building in this chapter was ace. And i cant wait for the next chapter, the ending to this one was priceless, i think kazu's really grown throughout this whole ordeal, and i love just how natrual his and ikkis relationship is : starnge, and confusing, and daunting, but deep down "legit" XD. Also, for some strange reason , i actually /like/ the badguys O_o not for like making everyones life horrible but... i dunno i think theyre pretty awesome in their own right. See, you're soo good you make me like the chars im not even supposed to like!XD and.. and i could go on and on but i dont want to bore you just know that adore this fic, and your too uberly awesome for writing it XD <3<3<3
sowwie again for disappearing D:i was secretly always there! (that sounded really stalker-ish aha aha ah... ^^;)
ciaoo~ <3

Another awesome chapter. Poor Kazu, that must of hurt like a bitch xD

I really love the way you write!

It'll be cool to see how this ends. You've nearly finished, right? (27 chapters in 3 years isn't necissarily bad, becasue you've kept up the quality in your updates, so I'm not really complaining xD)

Til you next update!