Very interesting...

is there a sequel or a companion? A companion of Sirius' thoughts, perhaps?

Fantastic.

OOh.. great delve into zee mind of Remus. Very interesting.

-paradox

Another fabulous story! One-shot, at least. You have such a talent for writing, it's not even funny. You really can show Remus' feelings, how betrayed he must have felt when he found out that Sirius had been a traitor and Peter was dead. Except that wasn't the case. Wonderfully written. I can imagine his excitement and anxiety when he saw Peter's dot on the Marauders Map, him being his natural, caring self. Sorry if that doesn't make sense. I'm very tired right now.

Very cool. this story was recommended from one of the columns and they were right. you did a really good job keeping him in character. the whole thing with the trial at the beginning was my favorite part.

This is a good one. Structure and descriptions of Remus' feelings is excellent, but you must already have heard that.

Ah this fic gives me goosebumps. I love Remus and how he's portrayed here. Very well written. Great work. _

*sniffles* I luv Lupin and Sirius! My absolute fav characters. Anyway, good job of keeping it real. I didn't really think Lupin was one for drinking away problems, but there you go.

Plainly said- Awesome fic. I especially loved the ending.

-Belle

Wow. Very well written. I really enjoyed the sentencing scene, and Remus' thoughts. This is a great characterization of him. Great work!

good...are you going to write more?

if it's not a bother, email and tell me...but you don't have too.

cool story.

Amazingly written. I love Remus Lupin. :-)

Thank you for making him a real person.

The thing I love most about MWPP stories is that even though we all know exactly what happened, a really good author can write some deep emotion into the characters. And you, my friend, are a really good author. Your Remus is the best werewolf I've seen in quite a while. You captured his caring, sensitive self while carefully studying his reactions to Sirius's predicament. Excellent fic.

Incredible! I found your article through the S.P.I.W. column, and I LOVE this! Remus Lupin is definitely one of my favorite HP characters, and to read such a believable point of view, especially about such a popular topic, is much fun. Bravo!

Wow! I really liked this, you should write on about it, you know, the scene in the shrieking shack and how Remus and Sirius try to restore their friendship afterwards. Itd be very exciting to say the least!

Well, there's nothing more that you need to write at the end scene-wise, but the story doesn't seem concluded. Not enough falling action. Perhaps you could end it when Sirius and Lupin hug each other, and Lupin realizes with out a doubt what happened years ago. This conclusion just seems like it's missing someone. Why do all the women at the trial have the same tearful reation and all the men at the trial have the same stoic reaction? Why does Remus argue with himself in a deranged like way? Overall, very good. Quite in character. The "Moment of truth" thing was good, as was "I was sixteen again."