 claymade 2009-11-11 . chapter 1Very nice! The real challenge doing a story that's purely centered around the romantic angle on a pair of characters--especially the canon pairing--is finding a way to make things fresh and unique when the core of the story is something that many have done many times before, i.e. "bring Ranma and Akane together."
And you pull it off extremely well. The letter works excellently as a framing device, enabling Akane's conversations with herself, and a lot of introspection and character development just coming out very naturally, without having to force it.
The ending was sweet and touching, pulling things nicely together on a warm note. All in all, an extremely enjoyable oneshot.
Thanks very much for sharing this! |
 Shadowalker666 2009-10-02 . chapter 1Have read this several times and should have commented before.
This is a lovely piece of writing, and very well done.
Have read it on your site and you are right it is better there. |
 PiNkBuN17 2009-04-20 . chapter 1OMG!
That was so cute and sweet!
I loved it a ton! |
 jojoangel01 2009-04-03 . chapter 1very innocent, very sweet and just perfectly for Ranma and Akane! |
 Luuu 2008-12-01 . chapter 1 Just cute ^^ |
 Sanny-chan 2008-10-19 . chapter 1That was really beautiful ... I wish Ranma would have said a bit more but I still loved it... especially the "meet me on the roof" part ^^ |
 Shane 2008-08-23 . chapter 1 I have just finished reading your fanfic Sincerely, Akane. I must say that I was thoroughly impressed with your ability to pick up an understated theme in a otherwise action dominated story, and make it breathe life all on its own. I have been a fan of Ranma 1/2 and other Rumiko Takahashi stories since I first picked up a manga. Your story has taken well thought out concepts from the series and tied them together nicely.
You have followed the storyline concepts for Ranma and Akane very well. As I read this I realized that I could actually see this as an episode of the series. Everything in the storyline fits. You stayed true to the characters, and for that you have my gratitude. I have read many fanfics of Ranma 1/2, but your stand apart from the others in my mind. You have gained a fan.
Thank you for allowing me to read your wonderful writing. I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
 SharLuvPink 2008-07-01 . chapter 1I like it.good work. this is my fav.*smiles* |
 Kipcha 2008-06-29 . chapter 1Aww! I loved it, it was just too adorable!
Kipcha |
 O'Donoghue 2008-01-09 . chapter 1Very nice. A quality read. |
 nishikaze 2007-06-18 . chapter 1I came across this story today, I really liked it. It was very well written and sweet.
Sometimes the short stories are the most fun. |
 Ahria 2007-06-13 . chapter 1That was so freaking cute! I loved it. I did go read it on your website, but wanted to review. ^_^ |
 Di Nguyen 2007-05-31 . chapter 1you should continue with this one.
it`s so good. |
 nieshka 2007-04-27 . chapter 1That was so nice. Sweet but not too sweet. Adding this to my Faves. Good job! |
 RoninAlchemist25 2007-04-03 . chapter 1Is very good, yes? (oh gods, i'm channeling Shampoo now. HELP ME!) It was short and simple, yet had that sweet quality without having so much your teeth fall out when you read it. |