omg. 0.0 dang Beetlejuice! down boy! lol i love this story. Beetlejuice is awesome, even if he needs to learn some manners. ^_^

Some story! Continue the chapter.I am simply dying to know what's going to happen next!

write what happens next right now! I want to know what happens next!

i love this story please update

EW bj scares me!

um, not sure what I think at this point...keep writing and I'll let you know!

Pretty good. I am a writer myself and a huge burton fan. found you on the collective "babe" lol. anyway i see a good start here actually. BeetleJuice himself could use a bit more sparatic-type movement like in the film. but i see it as an interesting twist to where the movie left off.

This is great! I've gotten really into it, I hope you update soon!

So far the story is exellent and leave the readers starving for more. Your descriptions are well developed but not too precice, leaving just enough for our own imaginations. (I am not a seasoned writer, so please take my review with a big grain of salt.)

Sara is a very beliveable character, and I can really understand her plight and associate with her feelings. It might help to have her worry and fixate on her death some more. After all, death is a very serious and dramatic change. Although I predict you will address that further in the story.

As for tips or advice, I think it would be good if you embellished more on Beetlejuice's and Sara's interactions; the chapters seem to move a bit fast. But what you do write is gold!

Please keep on doing what you're doing; it's great!

that was pretty good. cant wait to see what happens next!

Hey, this is a cute fanfic, please continue! :)

I was very happy to see this up. Can't wait for the next part!

Woo, another chapter! Nice! Keep going! *hug* M, fried beetles.

Yay another part! I was really happy when I saw this! It was a little short but I can tell something good is going to happen next. One thing though, in Beetlejuice, whether it is the Cartoon or movie, he can not say his name. That’s why he made Lydia play charades to guess his name in the Movie. Other than that I liked it!

E! I love how quick the updates are! Still a little rushed, but you did well w/the descriptions. Only BJ would think his disgusting place was 'romatic'. ^_^ anyway, I'm lovin this fic. Keep it up! ^_^