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Yankee Blaze... again! 2007-11-11 . chapter 4
Um, I was watching Charlie's Angels, and I got a good theme song for it. I might as well, send it to you on private message.
unknown person 2007-11-11 . chapter 1
This is the greatest thing on Earth! Oh my gosh! What will happen to Touya?
ClarinetWrathArineko 2007-10-15 . chapter 4
Question 1: Ashley Hammond
Question 2: Parody of the phrase "Green with Envy"

Anyway, I decided to read this instead of research today since my partner's gone, and it's nice! I like it! It's been too long since you updated, though...
Yankee Blaze 2007-07-10 . chapter 4
I have to go with either B or C (I'm guessing C)

Title Parody: MMPR (Power Rangers) Green With Evil Part 1-5
MMPR (Poke Rangers) Green Problems Part 1-5

Love the chapter, please continue soon.
Starfighter364 2007-07-10 . chapter 4
Good job, I couldn't have done any better with that chapter.
AshK 2007-07-10 . chapter 4
Good work! When are you going to update Moon Child? I was just wondering.

Sincerely,
TO/BB
RubyVulpix 2006-11-29 . chapter 3
Great chapter!
It was really good!
As for the quiz,the ranger leaders are:
Hoeen rangers:Jack a.k.a red Torchic ranger
Johto rangers:Eddie a.k.a red Typhosion ranger
Neo Rangers:Kris a.k.a red neo ranger
SPD:Terry a.k.a red Blaziken ranger
Orre:Anthony a.k.a Twilight ranger
Sonora:Aly a.k.a Blue Carvahna ranger
Lost galaxy:Owen a.k.a red Flareon ranger
and last but not least
Angels:Aliya
Anyway,this is great so far!
Keep up the good work and update soon!
ClarinetWrathArineko 2006-11-29 . chapter 3
Okay, the stories that have leaders revealed...

Sonora = Aly
Johto = Eddie
Neo = Kris
Hoenn = Jack
Angels = Aliya
SPD = Terry
Orre = Anthony

And, I'm speculating here, but I think Lost Galaxy's leader is Foster.

Anyway, good chapter! Sorry about the late review!
AshK 2006-11-25 . chapter 3
Excellent update! I like it! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK
Psyduck Ranger 2006-11-23 . chapter 3
Ok, there was one spelling mistake in particular, early on, that I don't think I can let you get away with. You called Madison a "which". I'm sure you know full wel that it's spelt witch, but it was just a typing error that your spell checker obviously didn't and couldn't pick up on. Also, "check" should have been "cheque", and Ipod is iPod. Sorry for being so nitpicky, but you know, I'm a perfectionist, and...well...anyway, the morphers seem a pretty original idea...except for the iPod of course. Lol. And that was really interesting, and a great plan for the main villain, but why did she need Lola's Charizard fang? Couldn't she have used any? Like one of Dragon Blaze's? And yes, the fight scenes were bad, but that's just because they're, well...Power Rangers style. But don't forget to have actual physical fighting as well, and make ure yopu show the girls morphing, it took me a while to work out which Ranger had which Zord, etc. I'd continue, but my stupid brother wants to go on...
Yankee Blaze 2006-11-22 . chapter 3
Great chapter! Here are the leaders of the Poke Ranger stories!

Jack- Mighty Morphin' Poke Rangers
Kris- Poke Rangers Neo
Eddie- Poke Rangers Johto
Aly- Sonora Rangers Revamped
Anthony- Poke Rangers Orre
Terry- Poke Rangers SPD
Aliya- Poke Rangers: Angels

Anyway, back to chappie! For your first attempt at a fight scene, it was marvelous. I kind of liked how the weapons were used. It was awesome and it was even cooler with the Megazord scene. Don't worry, you know in my first two chapters, that I needed to learn a lot more about the fight scenes, now I am a pro. So, practice is perfect, definitely!

Monsters:

Name: Photoditto
Description: A Ditto with a camera on his head, makes clones.
Criminal Reasons: He used the method of identity theft with one of the customers.
Level: Medium

Please continue soon and have a Happy Thanksgiving :)
Starfighter364 2006-11-22 . chapter 3
For Mighty Morphin Poke Rangers, it would be Jack Farrell. For Johto, it would be Eddie Barinholtz. For Poke Rangers Neo, it would be Kris Douglas. For Poke Rangers Orre, it would be Anthony Madigan. For Poke Rangers SPD Terry Vincent. For Lost Galaxy, it would be Owen Lygen. For Sonora Rangers, it would appear to be Aly, but I don't think they tell her last name. Finally, for this story, I think it is Aliya, but I don't know her last name. When will Noah appear?
AshK 2006-11-10 . chapter 2
Good job on this update! I like it!

Sincerely,
AshK
Psyduck Ranger 2006-11-10 . chapter 2
Yay Lawrence! I didn't expect that though...not just his presence, but the fact that he was at home in the city, rather than being a travelling coordinator. I'll be interested to see how that works. Ooh, that is a tough quiz, considering that half of them are in my fics! Lol. There's Anna, Rei, Nanene, Amii, and all the characters of PRA. i think that's it. Have I ever told you that you make weird names? Lol. Brilliant chapter, with an excellent twist at the end, I was obviously expecting Touya (another weird name) to be their mentor. This also means that they have an extra motive for fighting Maddison (hey! a normal name! But I wonder where you got it? Lol) now. But two things; first, don't have such extensive previews...then again, YF2 does...but we should have to read next chapter, it gies us surprises! I know it gives the reader a reason to read on, if they're interested, but still... Also, please give in depth descriptions for how the villains look, it's just so much better when it's more descriptive. Also, one more thing. I beg of you, do NOT have Lawrence's morph call the same as your current Rangers!

Sorry, one last thing and then I'll stop. The reason you didn't find Glacia's English name on the internet is because there is no English name yet! Most Sinnoh pokemon haven't yet been named, which is why it's so risky setting this in Sinnoh! I mean, Mio City, that's obviously going to be changed too...
Starfighter364 2006-11-10 . chapter 2
Ok, good chapter. I just want to tell you that you should have Noah having the Green Dotaitos Ranger, and not the Green Leafia Ranger. You see, Jason Kent has already said that he is going to be using the Eevee evolutions.
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