Reviews for The Heartbreaker

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Indignant-Nyu 2007-11-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseHow's 'Daemon' gonna react now? This is great. You are continuing, right?
zack 2007-01-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseDaemon Sumner? Demon Summoner? O.o Sounds akdward
zack 2007-01-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseo/o My brother's name Darryl... weird Man to Woman? Then Rosette kissed the same gender!? D:
L 2007-01-26 ch 4, anon.	abuseA smasing fic. But you havn't upbated in a month and 14 days Pleae UP DATE! I really like how the story is going so far. Aspesly with Magdalene being a big crybaby over losing Chrono. but the part I love how rosette led's a dubble life and that she has a Kitten. ^^ So Pleae UP DATE! NOW! L
ChronoFanatic 2006-12-28 ch 4,	abusei cant wait til you update it one question did you mean to put she instead of he?
yUkI nO tEnShI 16 2006-12-16 ch 4,	abuseThat was fabulous! Poor Rosette, getting punched and all...anyway, please update soon!
Maeleene 2006-12-13 ch 4,	abuse-laughs- That was too good!! I love this chapter!! Took me a bit to read it, but man... That ending... Ep, I love it all! Can't wait for more!! -Maeleene
MisoGirl 2006-12-12 ch 4,	abuseWhoa... everyone is running around with fake I.D.s...-_-;
snekochan 2006-12-12 ch 4,	abusepwafa! And he's sitting right across from her! Wahahahah! Rolls on the floor, laughing omfg- and I don't have one- you've GOT to write the next chapter soon! I love this! I love the missconseptions and the alias' that're sure to cause problems! Squeal! Wahahah! XD :)> Happy kitty! I loved the chapter, the only thing confusing was the fight scene, but the rest of it was so funny I forgot that! And the scene at the cafe...pwfa! I gotta go read it again!
Olynara Sedai 2006-12-12 ch 4,	abuseThis is hypocritical, but UPDATE SOON! LOL, Daemon Sumner... very clever. I like that you're using the original names, and I think you should stick with the name thing you're doing now. (Darryl when dressed as a guy. It'll be less confusing, I think.) I'm really enjoying this story, almost gay; a casino; running away from home; a fight; this one has it all! I can't wait to find out what happens next, so to hell with homework! Type! (um, you probably shouldn't take the advice of the school-hating procrastinator, lol) You rock, your friend, Olynara
Maeleene 2006-11-28 ch 3,	abuseYay! New chapter, new chapter!! Heart! Yeah, I suppose I'm a bit new for this section, though to be honest, I've poked around here before, then stopped for a while. I randomly watched CC again, though, and not only did I have to make an AMV for it (probably the hardest thing I've ever done on a computer), but I just had HAD to read fanfiction. Luckily, there are a lot of pretties to choose from. For making this chapter up as you went along, it's pretty damn good! I loved the end. Ah, Chrono... He made me laugh. I really can't wait for the next chapter! Things are gettin' good. :D
MisoGirl 2006-11-28 ch 3,	abuseUm... well Rosette would look like a scrony guy... I guess.
Olynara Sedai 2006-11-28 ch 3,	abuseIf you don't update soon I will find you can kill you. No, that wouldn't make sense. I will find you and tase you till you finish the whole story. I LOVE IT! Hysterical, and one of the few times I can actually say a girl is cross dressing. Cheers, bravo, brava and all that. Seriously, I cannot wait for the next chapter, I'm loving this. It's really interesting, too, I love Rosette's lives! And her cat! Sorry for the bad review, I'll do better WHEN YOU UPDATE! Your humble, slightly hysterical servant, Olynara
yUkI nO tEnShI 16 2006-11-28 ch 3,	abuseLOVE your story! It was funny, the fact that "Satella" hs...err...some "feelings" for Darryl who is actually the girl she hates...it was pretty amusing. ^-^ Anyway, your story if wonderful so I hope that you shall update soon. Ja ne!
snekochan 2006-11-28 ch 3,	abuseHaha! I love this! way more than GM, no offense. You know me, the fluffaholic. Did you have problems updating too? I've finally got chapter52 up, but I'd been trying since Saturday...whatever! I liked this chapter. So...what are the chances it's going to be Chrono? And he guessed she was a girl at first...always go with your first instints. Had I done that on the science test... Okays, I'm rambledambledambling. How about I say great chapter? Yeah, that's true. And it would've been better, I think, if you'd shown us a little of Mary's gushing, (you know, show don't tell) but if ou couldn't because of giving away stuff, just make her a gusher about other things instead, if/whenever Rosette and she run into eachother.

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