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| Pauline 2008-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to say that I really enjoyed 'Blind Justice'. It was very well written and you really captured the nature of the 'family'. I would have liked to see a little more of Teyla and Ronon's reaction to the situation inside the Temple, or even a glimpse of what they were going through on Atlantis, but it was still a great story. The best part by far is the homemade board game at the end. That was ingenius and hilarious. Great job! |
| LinziDay 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great story! Love the solution. Also, I adore the Weir/McKay friendship here. You've done it perfectly. What a sweet, sweet story. |
| Nychta Brhoche 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseI can't understand why you would be doubtful of the quality of this story. It is brilliant. Taut, tense tightly written. I could FEEL Sheppard's desperation at the end when even Ronan was beginning to question his sanity. And the end was so sweet - You wanna get him a teddy bear? Nah, he has his gun... - I could absolutely see John positioning himself on the bed so he could watch his friends even in the infirmary, until knowing they were okay finally allowed sleep to take him. And the game of Life - wraith insurance??!! I nearly fell out of my chair LMAO. Totally wacked and a brilliant way to bring in some needed humor to unwind the tension at the end. This went straight to my favorites list. Great job. |
| JackFan2 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseHonestly.. not sure why you'd be insecure about this story. It. Was. Brilliant. Adding you to my Author Aler List! |
| Trishkafibble 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was just gorgeous! You SO made me cry when Rodney was casually describing his nightmares...and the scene at the end with the game, and the gun--you have such a deft touch with your themes, and you find these nifty ways to bring them to our attention, and the characters'...and have I mentioned lately that your characterizations are wonderful? Yap, well, they are. There! A not-quite-so-fangirly review, finally! I mean, at least I was gushing about *specifics*, eh? You rock. End of story. ^^ |
| Lilith Lunatic 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseI love it. And the whole "you atone everyday" bit was so very Weir. |
| mandy 2007-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. I really liked that whatever trapped them was some tech from aliens that they haven't met and that Elizabeth was having to try to convince the computer of something without have a common basis to start from. Also like the implication that it could trap and judge Ancients--guess they're not the only powerful aliens in the universe. And the Game of Life--Atlantis Version was a great way to end the story: some humor after all the angst. Leaves the reader with a happy feeling. |
| Frisco 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat an original idea. Loved the whole story. But the Life game at the end is phenomenal. "Wraith insurance"! A real treat. |
| Llanea 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseLOL that was halarious at the end, mind if i make my own version in real life? i can imagine all my geeky mates and their very own puddle jumpers now rotflmao! *switches to serious mode* the whole rodny guilt thing was incredibly well done, he definately seems like a guilt-keeper. Loved it! goes straight to favs :> |
| Woodentree 2007-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThank you for posting, this was awsome. The idea alone was great and you discribed all the details so perfectly. Really good work! |
| stargate addict 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. (just like your other stories. :)) I liked the friendship between Rodney & Weir, how it didn't slip into McWeir. :) The game of Life- *grin* Wraith insurance... priceless. :D |
| Snarkydame 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseAnd that's another one of your stories on my favorites list. Geez, that's so unfair. Love the game of Life, by the way. |
| ValleyA 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseMan, I always love your stuff. I want to write like you when I grow up! LOL! Seriously, you've never disappointed me and this story is another example of why. Keep on writing! |
| Captain Peregrine 2006-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this! Whether or not you think it's not one of your "best efforts", I really, really liked this. Good job! |
| WriterJC 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed it very much - nicely done. |