Nice ficlet. Marty Junior and Marlene seem to be nice kids. It's good for them that their father has retired, and now can spend more time with them.

Like I said before, best daddy EVER! I love the interaction with his kids, very sweet.

Fantastic Job, bttf!!

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Marty McFly is the cutest dad ever!! I really love how you show how happy his kids make him.

Great work!! Off to the next one : )

1) Marty having a drinking problem? Talk about unexpected! I'm glad he got over it though AND never did drugs. I was almost dissapointed in him.

2) I love how D.A.R.E-esk this fic was!

3) I think it's adorable how you have Marty talk about Michael J Fox. So cute!

ps. if you've never watched this youtube video, you need to : ) /watch?v=iwY5o2fsG7Y

Aww, such a sweet chapter!

Family is important. It is strong and powerful and I for one am proud of Marty retiring to visit his wife and children.

Aw, that's such a nice story. :)

Nice work. You get a genuine Aussie thumbs-up. :)