Brillant fic ! Interesting, well-written, not to mention extremely sexy :P I love how you portray arrogant and provocative Ban in such a damn-so-orgiastic way, the same thing with Kazuki. Please update !^^

HEY amy-chan! *glomps*
Yay you updated the fic! After...2 years xD You really need to try being online more often. Heh heh. Can't wait till you update again!

pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaselpeaseplease UPDATE!

LOOK WE FREAKING ADORE YOU BUT FOR THE LOVE OF HUMANITY UPDATE! PLEASE I IMPORE YOU!

oh! please update soon. I wanna know what's next

Dun dun DUN! Where will this lead? Nobody knows!! Muahahahaha! Keep writing, I like it!

yes! i love you! i love this story! i missed reading banxkazuki, and i'm so glad i came across this one! i like where this is going so i hope you continue ^_^ thanks~

You're very good with narratives. However, I think you can still improve your portrayals of character dialogue. Maybe with characterization as well, since it roots from that. Or it could be just the way you present them, because I think there would be a way to incorporate their lines without sounding too rushed or scripted.

You use good English, which I highly appraise. :) Although, sometimes, you use rather inappropriate adjectives to describe certain touchy situations, I think you generally mean well. Your ideas seem to be nice and rather creative. :)

Good luck with future fics!

Deep Color

hehe i totally LOVE this story, i didn't expect to love ban/kazu so much but you are really making this work!

this story is making me all fangirly i hope you update soon!

Hiyee Amy chan! Okay, first of all, I had read this chapter, just that I didn't remember that XD. Lol! Anyway, finally you have me convinced that Ban and Kazuki pair is like 'wow'! Cha! And yeah, I really really loved Ban in this one... not that I ever 'hate' him XD...

Right so, one suggestion. Could you try and increase the chapter length please? Say, this one was a bit too short for your normal ones, ne? Otherwise, haha, GB fic, what's left to say? ^_^

And oh, the lemon idea was pretty good ~_^... I was thinking the Kazuki way exactly when Ban sent Ginji to get that XDD.

ha ha very cute. I love Kazuki, even if he's exceedingly feminine. I like the tension between the two!

love it! i find it very very cute! 'nd i love kazuki and ban fanfics! pls update soon

lol! update soon

Yay! I love KazukiXBan paring. This fic is very cute. I hope you come out with the next chapter really soon.

This is so amusing. Update soon!