LOL OMG!

Great description and I give an A+ for the challenge! That's a damn good challenge and I'm glad it was executed brilliantly.

I wish you went further for the ending =D like having her actually touch his skin, muscles...etc. ;)

Awesome job!! Definitely sexy =D

That's HOT! You did describe him very well. But how dare you stop? That is cruel *smile* ! I really like the way you are writing, please continue...

God, this was one of the hottest fanfictions I've ever read! How could there be any woman out there not wanting him after reading this! *lol* Well done!

Wow that was great! very very hot and so well written. Shower scene ... Drool :-b

The things is that there are so many differnent things about Alec/Jensen that make him into the sexiest man alive that it's hard to focus on what makes him sexy. You have have gone further than any other story I've read in trying to put that into words.

Well done and thank you for put those incredable images in my brain. I will keep them there forever in my happy place! :-)

You had me LOL over bathroom tissue- how odd ;)
It was so enjoyable how well you got into her head- created a new perspective for how she treated/looked/dismissed him. I liked how his emotions were caught up in their banter. So, Max is a peeping Tom, huh- too yummy. The only thing that would have made this better would have been if we could have gotten into his emotions just a little bit more- to make sure they matched hers. Good job :)

magnificent as ever.

i like it

what a fabulous idea... you're right about no one describing him to that extent, nice change

I might not have said the word but you used every tool imaginable to describe it. Suggestion is so under rated. Hot!

That was intense! Great story!

You definitely win a prize for this one! I need to go take a shower now.

Chapter two! Please write chapter two! I'm dying here.
I loved it!

wow. stunning! me likes! keep it up! alec is 2 die 4 n wit max in it. dey r so coolz.

Cool story! Yeah, Max finally realized that Alec is very SEXY!

o hot damn! i had 2 practically catch my drool in a bucket...*nosebleed*...ahem! really...liked the description..*mind travels back 2 the shower scene*...*shudders* just...hot damn...Alec is hot. u couldn't have put it any better than what u wrote...truly yummy.