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| Ditzyleo 2007-02-28 ch 2,  | abuseThinking there is more to that inner voice thing- had an inkling that there may be more in the first chapter but now i think there might be... Anyway. Keep going. Eager to see where this goes! But for now- off to bed as its very very very late(as you may be able to tell by how jumbled this review is- but i am too tired to fix it )Hope you update this soon as it -potential!(sp) |
| Ditzyleo 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseBrillent start. John as Rodney's inner voice is really funny. One tiny nitpick: Lorne's first name is actually Marcus/Marc- but it doesn't harm the story at all Brillent start! |
| angw 2006-11-13 ch 2, | abuseOh no! Teyla and ROdney 'life partners', trapped, no rescue(yet) and ulterior motives...eagerly awaiting more. |
| spiritedchihiro 2006-11-13 ch 2, | abuseoh...really good chapter! very exciting and loving all the interaction between teyla and rodney!! what does the matriach want with them??! i bet she has some evil plan up her sleeves! How does she know about their 'traits'...ooh excellent plot! |
| Mercury's Winter 2006-11-12 ch 2, anon. | abusePoor Rodney and Teyla! Life partner hehe well I guess we know what John is now ;) That Matriarc was pretty cryptic when she talked about the life partner thing hehe Oh, an unauthorized rescue! Go John! :D I'm loving this! More please! |
| ShepsAngel 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseYou know I'm loving this. Especially love Rodneys inner Sheppard. Hurry up and write more! |
| Mercury's Winter 2006-11-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, excellent start! :) Poor Teyla and Rodney :( More please! |
| spiritedchihiro 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseoh poor teyla and rodney!! I love stories with those two stuck together...come on John and Co. it is time to do some saving! |
| Hettie 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseYou are off to a good start. You seem to have the characters down, and your exposition is good. However there are several errors in spelling and verb usage that are distracting. Look forward to more of this fic. Thanks for sharing. |