Loved It! It was so sad but so good. Almost makes me want to write again. Almost... ^^ Great Job! Keep Writing!
~Mizu

OMG! It's me! (after remembering my username... lol) Right, so I thought this was very sweet. You really allowd yourself to fall into character, and I love how you use the first person and apostrophe (omg, literary device) to address Light from the other world. I absolutely loved how you referred to Light's work as a "carefully orchestrated symphony" and drew from the metaphor again in the last line: "waiting for a more hopeful melody." It's been so long since I've read anything you've written (aside from your Eleanor Rigby piece). It's really refreshing to read some of your more current work. You're so talented as a writer. Your story was short, simple, sweet--just the way I like my fanfiction. Nice work, sweet pea! ^_^

Wah~~! I'm gonna cry now T_T

not quite, but it was very sad and very beautiful. ^.^

Oh god, now sad... I felt really sorry for Raito's friend while reading this, and somehow felt really sorry for long lost little Light too. It's a really cute fic you know, please write more! *Griggles and reads again*