Very nicely done. Nice to see things from meimei's point of view. Have you read Just Slummin's Firefly thread. They are really good too! Thanks for sharing your talent.

Loved your tone and word choice throughout.

Lovely.

With only Mal to see her as "River."

Excellent fic, ma'am!

Oh, I liked this one. Very nice, and *sane*. Lovely writing, in a clutching/releasing tone.

Favourite line: There is a space in the depths of her mind where she cannot go; no threads to follow, no knots to unravel, just the Black, peering back at her from the spaces between feelings-thoughts-mine and feelings-thoughts-theirs

Wonderful use of imagry :)