I loved the tone of this: dark and longing...this was great!

you are still talented as ever, yet I still love reading this and wondering:

1. Who is this evil?

2. Will you write a sequel/ storie based on it

3. (There is no 3 but i just wanted to show you how evil it is to leave people completely wondering about what could happen next.)

4. If you do decide, I've changed emails to

(Don't email on the other, they don't work)

could i request that you write a story based on this? if you do or already have then email me at thanks

Just for the record, this is supposed to be one of those "anonymous bad-guy" situations . . .

Who is this villain? Very descriptive and ryhming. Good work!

Wow that was cool. That was a great poem. I loved it! Was it from Ken's P.O.V. when he was an emporer? You should do a sequel to this.