That was awesome.

That was a beautiful story.

If he went ghost his secret would be out. DUH.

WTF? YOU NAMED THE BABY NATIVITY? YOU ARE DEAD TO MEEEEEE!

... Hahahaha, just kidding, just kidding... But seriously, Nativity? Haha, well, you're American and know nothing of it, but dat just happens to b the name of one of the worst and rattiest governors of my time... Dat and he stole our school's ensignia...

Danny acted a bit too calm for a teenager in a situation like his.

... And why would you want to be pregnant at seventeen...?

Y'know, I thought this story was pretty good at first, even though I wondered why Danny didn't just phase out with Juliana. Then I read the ending and amended my former opinion: it's not good, it's great!

*laughs at end*

...shut up Sam.

Lmbo!

I think I like the story better the way it turned out, you don’t need your powers wen something such awsome happens, and I think it would be a good memory.

So I’m on Danny’s side in this.

Oh Sam why?

Awwwwwwwwwwww so cute, Me like

First off, the way Danny reacted is totally dead on in my own opinion. Plus how he is buying stuff last minute and missing curfew (thank goodness his parents didn't realize ;P)really adds to character development. Ness sounds cool and probably is a bigger part of you then you think. ;) I have the same problem. When I get online I usually hope around characters (mostly depending on what mood I am) and my friends freak out shrieking "WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH *insert real name*?". )

Anyways, Juliana sounds totally cool and I really like your voice and flow and nothing seems out of whack or any of that stuff. Totally a great job.

XD Poor Danny! That must be one of a man's worst nightmares...The things he has to put up with...

love the irony awsome really sweet and awsome i loved it

LOL. I wrote a story kind of like this, except that Danny was trapped in the elevator with a random woman, AND Sam. (the random woman was the one who was pregnant, not Sam) Just thought I'd mention it. Anyway, good job.

Sel

you know, even though I've been reading tons of Danny Phantom fanfics, I also forgot he could phase through the elevator. This was totally awesome

Hey i loved the story but next time add a bit of romance at the other than that good job.

Very nice:D