"It would set a precedent that they would follow for the rest of their lives." That line makes the entire fic!

I really enjoyed it, thanks!

yay. i like this story. keep writing it. it is really good.

Cannon-rape? Ouch!

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I loved it! SO MUCH! There's only one thing that I didn't like. It was too short! Update soon please! I just simply must know what will happen!

Hi I am Moongazer. I liked the story, but there is a lot of improvement to do. here is some friendly critticism. What! What! and What the heck! I am sorry, but your whent way too fast. Can you please. Well, there no point for the rush. put more details, and jinformation stuff about the characters. I felt it flashed by, so it's definitely going help people understand better. Ah there is no steps in Hogwarts great hall. Oh yeah Remus is way two bookwormish. Well, he is not quite that. I say he is quietly rude just try that. It's going to work. Look nothing in here was meant to be mean, look I just would improve a lot. Practice Practice Practice makes better, so yeah I suggest take my advise. Hey if you have time read my stories, and please review. Please update soon! Bye

"I don't care if it makes me into Merlin..." Haha. Liking it, also your corageous fight against... the canon marauders. And plunderers. And rapists. :)

Can't wait to see what you have in store for this.

Looks really good so far.

:D

Nice job.

X'andirth